
6/1/2011 c1 Moriras
wow, this is amazing
very well written and a captivating story
there were a few grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed
otherwise, this first chapter was a perfect introduction into what i know will be a great story
wow, this is amazing
very well written and a captivating story
there were a few grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed
otherwise, this first chapter was a perfect introduction into what i know will be a great story
6/1/2011 c1 Anonymous Is Me
Awesome story so far! Keep up the good work! And would you mind reading&reviewing my story, “Angelic”, or my newest story, "That One September"?
Awesome story so far! Keep up the good work! And would you mind reading&reviewing my story, “Angelic”, or my newest story, "That One September"?