5/9 c1 serenadndartsgmail.com
Hi,

I recently read your story and just wanted to say how much I truly enjoyed it. Your characters, worldbuilding, and storytelling really drew me in it’s clear you’ve put a lot of heart into your work.

As I was reading, I found myself inspired with an idea that I genuinely believe could complement or enhance your story in an exciting way. I’d love the chance to share it with you, if you're open to hearing it!

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Warm regards,
Serena

10/3/2006 c1 9EroMaru
I think it would make a really good rock song. I like to sing it!Love&PeaceHateshi

5/15/2001 c1 David Williams
It was good. It had a few places that were confusing due to the fact that I couldn't tell whether the bruises that were afor mentioned were physical or mental.

Generally, it had a feel of longing for someone whom you know is not good for you, yet you chase along anyway promising yourself that they'll change. While secretly you know that they never will...

5/9/2001 c1 5Pretty Waste
Aw, good.

7/2/2000 c1 159Heather Goldbug
Wow...very good. At the beginning, you said "you see", but I think it looks a little strange there. But other than that, it was very, very good.