3/2/2012 c2 47Lady Riss
That was sad and creepy. I really shouldn't be reading this this late at night... but I can't stop.

6/6/2011 c1 4EBSmith
nice, it's like an urban myth ghost story that kids tell each other, it works as a short story, but I think it would be better if it was told in the third person as a narrative instead of a play. I want to imagine the person telling the story holding a torch below there face.