12/22/2011 c2 1atomic-pocket-watch
even though it's only two chapters long i'm liking this story so far :) please update soon, i'd love to see where this is going :D

6/5/2011 c2 4White Alchemist
I feel pity. I can be friends with her! :) heehee.

6/5/2011 c2 4grayandme4ever
i'm really liking this. i like lily's character. there's just something about her that makes me like her. anyways, great job. i can't wait to read more.