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11/7/2012 c5 livingspiritz1
A snake (garden) should be added to the elemtns of nature.
10/18/2012 c4 6Athrine Jeanne
Wow is the first word I thought. This is shaping into a great story. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
10/18/2012 c2 8Jax Creation
This is brilliant :3
Beautiful prose that flows well.
And a wonderful display of emotional grasp.
I loved Taisuke's inner turmoil as he tried to pull the trigger. Fantastic!
It's very late here so unfortunately I don't have time to read the rest, but I look forward to reading more!
9/8/2012 c3 TheCrimsonTears
Since you seem to appreciate feedback, I'll give you some. This story is really intriguing and frankly, I feel that its better than Wand. So please, don't neglect this story, it has so much potential.
7/21/2012 c3 Joflower
Looks promising so far. Hope you update soon.
7/5/2011 c2 23DecayedDreams
A small wording problem here, not that it's wrong or anything but I think it could have a smoother transition

"that had come forward" - that came forward.

Everything looks good. I love your descriptions, but the only thing I can ask is for a description of Taisuke.

I'm looking forward to more
6/10/2011 c2 8mjinx
Oh, this looks interesting. Your writing style is quite good and I can't pinpoint any grammatical or spelling mistake. Good job for that!

Anyway, I'll be waiting for more updates. ^_^
6/7/2011 c1 23DecayedDreams
catchy! what else is there to say about this...

Looking for ward to more

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