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6/8/2011 c1 34DanielStalwart
awww that's so sweet

"She loved everything about Sean; his flaming red hair, his clear green eyes and the way that they sparkled when he laughed, the warmth and laughter she could always hear in his kind voice." this description of him reminds me of "you know who" in twilight. I swear that book forever cements the looks and descriptions of the "good looking man" into retardness.

Amber never realized how hard writing could be...yes! totally agree on that! we should celebrate the joys of being a writer some day.

its cute and simple I should say but days and days for such a poem? its not as if she's writing a novel length poem for him...(I know, never fell in love before so sue me :P)
6/8/2011 c1 3Rosemarysgraden001
Aww this is so cute, while its not amazing. You can tell that its got heart. Poor Amber her mom doesnt sound nice.

~Rose~

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