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4/16/2012 c1 277electrical moon
This is such a gorgeous poem! I love the summer imagery and the second stanza.
6/25/2011 c1 Ernest Bloom
some fine, fine elements here. very

fine. i'm uncertain about how the

gestalt gels, however; the theme

seems a bit airy.
6/12/2011 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Gorgeous! Of course, you know I have a weakness for poems about writing, as that seems to be a very common theme in my own writing, and then combining that with the beautiful images of summer (what a gorgeous season, seriously). Gah. I love it. That second stanza is amazing. Love love love. :) Keep writing! :)
6/9/2011 c1 35iliads
Gorgeous. Simply gorgeous.

"She likes the vowels best,

pecking crystallized A's from salamander

before chewing up February whole."

This was genius.
6/9/2011 c1 Tytherpol
back caresses

blue preserved

sticky summer

best crystallized

before

running through

juice with

cross flowers

raising

internal comfort

said

repeat that

truth

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