
8/29/2016 c8 No Love Good Life
That is awesome how you showed them as Greek Gods. I've read some story's were the author didn't really show the Greek God side of them.
That is awesome how you showed them as Greek Gods. I've read some story's were the author didn't really show the Greek God side of them.
6/13/2016 c1 Had Love Lost it
Awesome beginning.I hope the rest is as good as this one.
Awesome beginning.I hope the rest is as good as this one.
5/20/2016 c26 prosaa
Great story!
I strongly suggest you take a look at your usage of your and you're, as well as there their and they're. I think in chapter 24, the wrong "they're" was used almost every time.
Great story!
I strongly suggest you take a look at your usage of your and you're, as well as there their and they're. I think in chapter 24, the wrong "they're" was used almost every time.
3/24/2015 c25 Guest
OH MY GODS I NEED MORE AND CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE! One from Henri or Alex's point of view please?
OH MY GODS I NEED MORE AND CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE! One from Henri or Alex's point of view please?
10/29/2014 c1 Guest
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12/7/2012 c26 Divine Psyche
I think I speak for everyone when I ask: exactly where is that sequel? I stumbled across this yesterday, and was engrossed almost instantaneously. I was really dissapointed when I couldn't find the sequel on your profile, though... It was getting really interesting. Anyway, I really hope you haven't given up on this
I think I speak for everyone when I ask: exactly where is that sequel? I stumbled across this yesterday, and was engrossed almost instantaneously. I was really dissapointed when I couldn't find the sequel on your profile, though... It was getting really interesting. Anyway, I really hope you haven't given up on this
10/4/2012 c25 Charisasori
Great story! I take back what I said about the mountains, though. On the other hand, this was a very exciting and fun story. BUT, I went to your profile and couldn't find the sequel. Are you still going to go through with it?
Great story! I take back what I said about the mountains, though. On the other hand, this was a very exciting and fun story. BUT, I went to your profile and couldn't find the sequel. Are you still going to go through with it?
10/4/2012 c10 Charisasori
Loving this story so far. Just had to review on this chapter, though. I was laughing really hard at the part where it says:
While there were arguments and personal space issues, we generally just watched TV. The most interesting thing we watched was probably how two mountains had appeared in Greece overnight but, besides that, we had quite an uneventful few days.
Lol. I can just imagine how well that would go over! :-) I wish two mountains would appear overnight -it'd be fun to see the reactions to that. Also, I really liked the last chapter. The part where they were all locked in their Greek god/goddess states was kind of funny and really fascinating.
Loving this story so far. Just had to review on this chapter, though. I was laughing really hard at the part where it says:
While there were arguments and personal space issues, we generally just watched TV. The most interesting thing we watched was probably how two mountains had appeared in Greece overnight but, besides that, we had quite an uneventful few days.
Lol. I can just imagine how well that would go over! :-) I wish two mountains would appear overnight -it'd be fun to see the reactions to that. Also, I really liked the last chapter. The part where they were all locked in their Greek god/goddess states was kind of funny and really fascinating.
8/27/2012 c13
2A-knows-all
well this was certantly not ur best chapter it was kind of confusing with that whole aaron thing

well this was certantly not ur best chapter it was kind of confusing with that whole aaron thing
8/25/2012 c12 A-knows-all
wow defenit change in direction but i love it so far especially the romance brewing between henri and mia
wow defenit change in direction but i love it so far especially the romance brewing between henri and mia
8/23/2012 c8 A-knows-all
This chapter was fairly interesting only kept my attention a little bit during the action scenes they didn't excit me that i didn't feel like i was actually there it was abitboring but the outlines were very interesing i like where this story is going
This chapter was fairly interesting only kept my attention a little bit during the action scenes they didn't excit me that i didn't feel like i was actually there it was abitboring but the outlines were very interesing i like where this story is going