
9/25/2011 c8 the unbirthday girl
Loved this chapter. So what's going on? Are they really supposed to lose control, or, you know, lock it up?
Loved this chapter. So what's going on? Are they really supposed to lose control, or, you know, lock it up?
9/24/2011 c5 the unbirthday girl
EEEEW, INCEST. Well, not that that's not common in Greek mythology, but still. Mother and child? EEW. Other than that...scene*shudder*, good chapter.
EEEEW, INCEST. Well, not that that's not common in Greek mythology, but still. Mother and child? EEW. Other than that...scene*shudder*, good chapter.
9/24/2011 c3 the unbirthday girl
I really like this so far. Your idea is original, and it's really well written
I really like this so far. Your idea is original, and it's really well written
9/19/2011 c19
13the ticking clock
amazing...love Henri! yeah! And update whenever you can! :D I'll be waiting...
awesome stuff. really great description, emotion, and prose throughout the whole story. incredable.
:D

amazing...love Henri! yeah! And update whenever you can! :D I'll be waiting...
awesome stuff. really great description, emotion, and prose throughout the whole story. incredable.
:D
9/17/2011 c2 TriciaChristine
Ohmigod, this is amazing! I can't stop reading, and I've only just STARTED reading. :D Keep writing, you're amazing!
Ohmigod, this is amazing! I can't stop reading, and I've only just STARTED reading. :D Keep writing, you're amazing!
9/17/2011 c18 Sasquatch818
OOOh my goodness, well i want more eric, im really hoping that guy that saved her was eric, and ummm i want to know more, to many questions unanswered, lol:)
OOOh my goodness, well i want more eric, im really hoping that guy that saved her was eric, and ummm i want to know more, to many questions unanswered, lol:)
9/15/2011 c18
1save the polar bears
No Eric! Lots of Henri/Mia such a ciffy! Please update again soon!

No Eric! Lots of Henri/Mia such a ciffy! Please update again soon!
9/15/2011 c18
13the ticking clock
LOVED it! Aretims is awesome...all these clues...wow. an angel? The suspense is killing me! :)
your descriptions were better than ever, the emotions clear and realistic throughout this chapter...I could really connect with the charecters. good job.
hmm...I guess I would like to see another chapter from Erik's POV, maybe adding more mystery to the whole plot while the gods are figuring out what is going on...and assuming Apollo's not bleeding to death on the floor like the others, a healing session might be cool from the god of medicine...hmm. and maybe we could find more out about this Percy charecter...
can't wait for more! update soon!

LOVED it! Aretims is awesome...all these clues...wow. an angel? The suspense is killing me! :)
your descriptions were better than ever, the emotions clear and realistic throughout this chapter...I could really connect with the charecters. good job.
hmm...I guess I would like to see another chapter from Erik's POV, maybe adding more mystery to the whole plot while the gods are figuring out what is going on...and assuming Apollo's not bleeding to death on the floor like the others, a healing session might be cool from the god of medicine...hmm. and maybe we could find more out about this Percy charecter...
can't wait for more! update soon!