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10/1/2011 c1 9Air Rey
to make my review genuine, I'll start with the word..."WOW".

brilliant! Your images are powerful and deep. they give the proper kick that leaves ambiguity that haunts me and livens my curiosity and insight.

the lines flow smoothly. I find them easy to read. good job!
9/5/2011 c1 51instant bliss
This poem is kickass. I love the opposition between "He" and "She". I love the imagery, especially in the second stanza. And I love the attitude behind this poem - that someone else's religion won't take away the person who makes you happy. Brava.
7/26/2011 c1 skersey
I thought is said "pooping dreams from prescription"

Epic fail, my apologies :)

I like this a lot, because it has ZERO rhyme scheme! And it flows so nice, like you could rattle it off to an audience and be like "screw you all" when you're through (I love slam poems that are like that, I get all shivvery)

The message here is really interesting: I took it to be like "I'm bad and there's really nothing I can do about it, and I probably won't bc this is modus operandi and I'm cool with it"

This is nothing short of STELLAR. Keep posting, it would be a crime if you didn't.

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