for The Cursed1/24/2012 c4 MysticBird106
Two big thumbs up!
Two big thumbs up!
6/24/2011 c3 
5Chromes
If you combine your sentences into paragraphs it will be more aesthetically appealing to the reader. It will let the eyes flow down the screen easier so the reader can connect ideas and thoughts. :)
5ChromesIf you combine your sentences into paragraphs it will be more aesthetically appealing to the reader. It will let the eyes flow down the screen easier so the reader can connect ideas and thoughts. :)
6/20/2011 c2 6Carmel March
Great second chapter. Getting to know characters is one of my favourite parts about reading a story, and I'm really liking the characters so far. Can't wait to read more!
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchGreat second chapter. Getting to know characters is one of my favourite parts about reading a story, and I'm really liking the characters so far. Can't wait to read more!
~Carm~
6/15/2011 c1 Carmel March
I think this is such a great beginning! I'm intrigued to see where this will go! Write more soon :)
~Carm~
I think this is such a great beginning! I'm intrigued to see where this will go! Write more soon :)
~Carm~