for The Scorpion's Sting7/6/2011 c2 Guest
Wonderful! Update soon
Wonderful! Update soon
6/21/2011 c1 
4Thalia Bryne
Hmm. I've decided to repay you. I like the descrptiveness in here. I can't imagine what would make him turn like that. Well, keep it up! Thanks for my own reviews :)
4Thalia BryneHmm. I've decided to repay you. I like the descrptiveness in here. I can't imagine what would make him turn like that. Well, keep it up! Thanks for my own reviews :)
6/16/2011 c1 Guest
Nice. I like the story so far! Continue the good work!
Nice. I like the story so far! Continue the good work!
6/13/2011 c1 thisaccountisdeleted45
I really like it so far...the plot seems really interesting!
I would love to read more, thought there are a few mistakes they don't put a damper on the story...Please Continue!
I really like it so far...the plot seems really interesting!
I would love to read more, thought there are a few mistakes they don't put a damper on the story...Please Continue!