for The Red10/31/2011 c1 
3Edan Marie
Wow. This is... One of the best, albeit disturbing, things I've ever read. I love how you manage to keep the story flowing perfectly despite the fragmented thoughts in between parts f the story. You are a brilliant writer.
3Edan MarieWow. This is... One of the best, albeit disturbing, things I've ever read. I love how you manage to keep the story flowing perfectly despite the fragmented thoughts in between parts f the story. You are a brilliant writer.
6/17/2011 c1 5PoisonedMind
Totally twisted, and messed up.
BUT FRICKIN' AWESOME!
I love how you describe Amy's insanity, her voices, and the like. Your writing style is very flowing, and it keeps the reader interested. There were no boring spots. I love this!
GO INSANITY!
5PoisonedMindTotally twisted, and messed up.
BUT FRICKIN' AWESOME!
I love how you describe Amy's insanity, her voices, and the like. Your writing style is very flowing, and it keeps the reader interested. There were no boring spots. I love this!
GO INSANITY!
6/17/2011 c1 Lia Jenson
This was great and it really illustrated how one moment of losing control can ruin everything. I also like your writing:no significant mistakes in grammar or spelling I can see and lots of descriptions so the image can be as clear as possible.
P.S.-I tried to review while logged in, but my computer was being an idiot and somehow made it impossible. Sorry! :)
This was great and it really illustrated how one moment of losing control can ruin everything. I also like your writing:no significant mistakes in grammar or spelling I can see and lots of descriptions so the image can be as clear as possible.
P.S.-I tried to review while logged in, but my computer was being an idiot and somehow made it impossible. Sorry! :)
6/17/2011 c1 5SimonClemens
This is written nicely and quite effectively creepy. I also like the thought fragments that helped show the conflist with Any and her madness.
5SimonClemensThis is written nicely and quite effectively creepy. I also like the thought fragments that helped show the conflist with Any and her madness.