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6/23/2011 c1 Kahlan Aisling
[For the record, I try to remain strictly prose. I fail at poetry and I don't know this subject matter, so you won't be getting an intelligent review.]

Overall, I'd give it four of five stars - I like the meter and rhythm you've chosen and the refrain adds a nice touch. The only problems I saw were-

"the people rise to face the demons renewed assault" 'Demons' should have an apostrophe, after the 's' if plural and before it if singular.

Also, you may want to insert commas in some choice places; it gets a little confusing at times.

But nicely done.

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