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2/21/2012 c2 dee
Oh my.. I can hear sound of giggling from their friends from the corner of the room. But I don't think they hear it. :)

I like it when you end it with the kiss. Not some yelling or clapping from their friends.
1/24/2012 c2 2Love-Comes-In-Many-Forms

I have to say, I've read this story a few times, and I absolutely love it. It has well written tension, and a realistic sense of denial when it comes to Leila. Despite this, I have a bone to pick with you. The ending.

The thing is, I think it is slightly rushed. It gets really, really interesting when Kent mentions this "mystery guy" and chucks the list back at her, but you don't drag it out long enough. These moments are really the turning point of a story for me, so right now yours is sitting on a VERY thin ledge as your story is absolutely amazing, and I love the plot and such, but that last moment could improve so much.

If you're up to it, I would love to see this story edited, but that is my personal opinion, and perhaps many disagree.

Anyway, I do hope you continue writing, and that you use this slight error to your advantage and improve on your writing. You have a talent.


12/29/2011 c2 Lazy-Teenager Syndrome
This story is so cute. (: You should do a Kent point of view.
12/11/2011 c2 Hayleyschrock
:) This story makes me happy. It's fabulous and it's just too cute!
12/5/2011 c2 46SwimmingThroughExistance
11/23/2011 c2 hopelesslovebird
so cute but made me pretty depressed... considering i like my best guy friend and he happens to not like me back :C haha oh well still an adorable story!
11/18/2011 c2 16mizgardenia21
This was sooooooooooo cute! I loved it!
11/2/2011 c2 1Ashara
perfect.i love how everything works out.
11/2/2011 c1 Ashara
But it was all going so cutely,I thought he liked her too.How could he?
9/28/2011 c2 HarderToBreathe
That was freaking AWESOME! I loved how Kent reacted to all the checklists and his enraged confession. And it's funny how clueless she was to her own feelings. Great job! Keep it up. :)
9/17/2011 c2 frouwe
That was so cute. I loved the last scene. And Mark and Lewis, dunno why.
9/13/2011 c2 ffh
awww.. that was so adorable
8/14/2011 c2 The Imagination Addict
ahahahaha omg this is epic cute. AWWWWW. one of the best best-friends-to-bgr short stories ive ever read :)
8/6/2011 c2 1JustWords
OMG! Loved it, gosh, epic and CUTE story! The way this was written is amazing, containing so many elements that makes the reader catch their breath as they wait for the characters to make that next discovery.

Love this story, hope there's more where it came from :D :p ;D
8/2/2011 c2 1azeeunlove
I was smiling throughout the whole story :) :)
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