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7/4/2011 c4 1swamp13
lovee thiss ((: please update soon (:
6/28/2011 c4 2DiamondWolf14
I have nothing to say, just that it's improving and improving. Well done!
6/28/2011 c3 DiamondWolf14
I like it, but I only now saw that you switch from 'I' to 'Amy' quickly. It might be a bit better if you chose one of them, or made it italic or something.(what Amy thinks.)

Any way, other then that, it's great, and I can't wait to see how this continues. :)
6/27/2011 c2 6carminewolf
nice wording...
6/27/2011 c3 carminewolf
I like that Lia character O.O haha, sorry. AH. THIS STORY IS ACTUALLY...not bad...I mean...im not used to loved stories, but its actually pretty interesting. Im surprised...actually...SO. GOOD JOB. great job really...gee...this stories off to a pretty darn good start.
6/27/2011 c2 2DiamondWolf14
Hm...Nice! Keep it up!
6/27/2011 c1 DiamondWolf14
Interesting, I guess. Good work!
6/27/2011 c1 1swamp13
i like this (:
6/26/2011 c1 7toMORROWacshuly
i am very intrigued! i really like this first chapter and how you started it out. i also love the descriptions. great job!

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