for Heart and Soul6/28/2011 c4 
2DiamondWolf14
I have nothing to say, just that it's improving and improving. Well done!
2DiamondWolf14I have nothing to say, just that it's improving and improving. Well done!
6/28/2011 c3 DiamondWolf14
I like it, but I only now saw that you switch from 'I' to 'Amy' quickly. It might be a bit better if you chose one of them, or made it italic or something.(what Amy thinks.)
Any way, other then that, it's great, and I can't wait to see how this continues. :)
I like it, but I only now saw that you switch from 'I' to 'Amy' quickly. It might be a bit better if you chose one of them, or made it italic or something.(what Amy thinks.)
Any way, other then that, it's great, and I can't wait to see how this continues. :)
6/27/2011 c3 carminewolf
I like that Lia character O.O haha, sorry. AH. THIS STORY IS ACTUALLY...not bad...I mean...im not used to loved stories, but its actually pretty interesting. Im surprised...actually...SO. GOOD JOB. great job really...gee...this stories off to a pretty darn good start.
I like that Lia character O.O haha, sorry. AH. THIS STORY IS ACTUALLY...not bad...I mean...im not used to loved stories, but its actually pretty interesting. Im surprised...actually...SO. GOOD JOB. great job really...gee...this stories off to a pretty darn good start.
6/26/2011 c1 7toMORROWacshuly
i am very intrigued! i really like this first chapter and how you started it out. i also love the descriptions. great job!
7toMORROWacshulyi am very intrigued! i really like this first chapter and how you started it out. i also love the descriptions. great job!