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7/2/2011 c1 1Scorned
Bold chapter makes Clear mad. Clear no like bold chapter.

Crappy font out of the way, this was interesting. If you made it into a multi-chaptered fic, I would definitely read it, although I would want Lucas to end up with another OC instead of Cam. You know, make a love triangle or some such 3 sided object.

So, I'll go ahead and put this on story alert in case you do continue it (Feels dumb as she puts alert on a one-shot), and I'll hope quite dearly that this BOLD thing isn't your new thing. :O
6/30/2011 c1 Poptart Guava King
DEPRESSING. Seriously, poor guy. D:
6/29/2011 c1 pretensions
it does work as a short, angsty one-shot, but you could also definitely turn it into a series (the happiness of the ending depends entirely upon you!). i would be interested in seeing it expanded into a series, if you'd be willing!
6/29/2011 c1 4yaoi8808
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! Cam and Lucas NEED to quit dancing around and start a serious relationship!
6/29/2011 c1 25Esquirella
Do you think you will turn this into a story? It's quite good!
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