for Francis & Wesley12/24/2013 c1 TechNomaNcer28
Oh my!God,this was seriously an amazing story!Really sad and heart-breaking,to lose that kind of love at such a young age,you could really see how much they adored one another!
Oh my!God,this was seriously an amazing story!Really sad and heart-breaking,to lose that kind of love at such a young age,you could really see how much they adored one another!
2/19/2012 c1 
4Fainting In Coils
Fantastic one-shot. Works just fine as a stand-alone, but also has the reader wanting the answers to so many questions. How'd Wesley die, why's Francis keeping him around (I mean, we sort of know why, but WHY?), etc. Very interesting, and I love how well you developed a character in so little time, and with virtually no dialogue or action. It amazes me. Great job!
4Fainting In CoilsFantastic one-shot. Works just fine as a stand-alone, but also has the reader wanting the answers to so many questions. How'd Wesley die, why's Francis keeping him around (I mean, we sort of know why, but WHY?), etc. Very interesting, and I love how well you developed a character in so little time, and with virtually no dialogue or action. It amazes me. Great job!
7/3/2011 c1 1BethAnnEmmaJean
Wow, what an intense story. And of course the the air of mystery... how did Wesley die? How is Francis involved in his death? What will happen to Francis? Very intriguing. The descriptions of a poor, grief stricken, man are displayed very well with how he perceives things. Very good. I liked it. Thanks for the good read!
~BethAnnEmmaJean
1BethAnnEmmaJeanWow, what an intense story. And of course the the air of mystery... how did Wesley die? How is Francis involved in his death? What will happen to Francis? Very intriguing. The descriptions of a poor, grief stricken, man are displayed very well with how he perceives things. Very good. I liked it. Thanks for the good read!
~BethAnnEmmaJean