for Fatale3/22/2013 c7 Aquarian Love
Damn. I reached the end. Oh, gosh I cant wait to see if this continues happily or they are both destroyed. You have a very captivating story and I sure hope you continue. I will be watching to view new chapters.
Damn. I reached the end. Oh, gosh I cant wait to see if this continues happily or they are both destroyed. You have a very captivating story and I sure hope you continue. I will be watching to view new chapters.
3/22/2013 c5 Aquarian Love
Increditable possessive. I cant stop reading. The suspense is incredible and the need to know what will happen next. Very good writing.
Increditable possessive. I cant stop reading. The suspense is incredible and the need to know what will happen next. Very good writing.
3/22/2013 c4 Aquarian Love
The secret holds for another chapter and captivate the reader. The sorce of his pain and the sorce of her pain just words away. An interesting way to stimulate a constant audience. The suspence mounting and insisting the curious to continue to read. Most interesting chapter.
The secret holds for another chapter and captivate the reader. The sorce of his pain and the sorce of her pain just words away. An interesting way to stimulate a constant audience. The suspence mounting and insisting the curious to continue to read. Most interesting chapter.
3/22/2013 c2 Aquarian Love
A very good chapter. You have started to develope a personality to the characters that is pleasing and keeps the interest of the reader. It will be interesting to see how this will play out in the next chapters. Your ending is just perfect and lightens the suspense.
A very good chapter. You have started to develope a personality to the characters that is pleasing and keeps the interest of the reader. It will be interesting to see how this will play out in the next chapters. Your ending is just perfect and lightens the suspense.
3/22/2013 c1 Aquarian Love
Wonderful start to capture the reader and encourage continuing. It gives a sence of interest and mystery around the vampire an even the man she left. Is he dead or will he survive this attack. Very good job.
Wonderful start to capture the reader and encourage continuing. It gives a sence of interest and mystery around the vampire an even the man she left. Is he dead or will he survive this attack. Very good job.
7/12/2011 c2 
1FromMyBackyard
"What's it like to be a vampire?"
So, how many times has she heard this question? I would assume she stop counting, if ever she did, long ago.
Off to a good start, so far. Interested in seeing how this plays out.
1FromMyBackyard"What's it like to be a vampire?"
So, how many times has she heard this question? I would assume she stop counting, if ever she did, long ago.
Off to a good start, so far. Interested in seeing how this plays out.