
3/22/2012 c14
1Sachi Nehme
Wow. Just, wow.
Points for creativity! Despite the high amount of celebrities going into rehab/clinic, I haven't seen a story about meeting one there.
I tend to stay away from stories that involve psychiatric facilities because they tend to be highly unrealistic and over-dramatized (what, was their research "Girl, Interrupted"?). However, I love that you put just enough detail to make the reader think, "Okay. Yes. This is a place that could exist." But you leave a lot to the imagination, so there's no chance for it to get very surreal.
Wonderful, absolutely riveting!

Wow. Just, wow.
Points for creativity! Despite the high amount of celebrities going into rehab/clinic, I haven't seen a story about meeting one there.
I tend to stay away from stories that involve psychiatric facilities because they tend to be highly unrealistic and over-dramatized (what, was their research "Girl, Interrupted"?). However, I love that you put just enough detail to make the reader think, "Okay. Yes. This is a place that could exist." But you leave a lot to the imagination, so there's no chance for it to get very surreal.
Wonderful, absolutely riveting!
2/18/2012 c14 Alixermixer
I really like this story and I hope you come back to finish. I feel bad for Talia, she kinda of like a yo-yo between the boys. I feel like Jack is going to pick Abby and hurt Talia in the process. I hope that Evan keeps his promise that they will hang out when he gets out.
I really like this story and I hope you come back to finish. I feel bad for Talia, she kinda of like a yo-yo between the boys. I feel like Jack is going to pick Abby and hurt Talia in the process. I hope that Evan keeps his promise that they will hang out when he gets out.
12/22/2011 c1 Guest
I just read this whole thing today, and I didnt want to stop. I fell in love with your characters and I would love for you to update soon :)
I just read this whole thing today, and I didnt want to stop. I fell in love with your characters and I would love for you to update soon :)
11/15/2011 c14 the vcg
I really really enjoyed your story. Very original and even though the main character is in high school it doesnt read like a typical cheesy high school romance. I hope you update soon, I am looking forward to seeing how the spring fling goes!
I really really enjoyed your story. Very original and even though the main character is in high school it doesnt read like a typical cheesy high school romance. I hope you update soon, I am looking forward to seeing how the spring fling goes!
10/15/2011 c14 mihaela
I am very sory for the late review, but my computer broke and it took me forever to fix it, but I can not wait to read more, please update soon
I am very sory for the late review, but my computer broke and it took me forever to fix it, but I can not wait to read more, please update soon
10/15/2011 c14
7gulistala
Jack's drifting away towards Abby and by the time he finalises that, I really hope Talia and Evan would've further established their relationship. Really hope so.
Keep up the good work, I'm really interested in this story!

Jack's drifting away towards Abby and by the time he finalises that, I really hope Talia and Evan would've further established their relationship. Really hope so.
Keep up the good work, I'm really interested in this story!
10/15/2011 c11 gulistala
Okay so Nina's not the sister but a daughter of a nurse. Hah. I don't know why that didn't occur me, too.
Okay so Nina's not the sister but a daughter of a nurse. Hah. I don't know why that didn't occur me, too.
10/15/2011 c9 gulistala
Nina is Evan's sister! And Evan's using a different surname so people don't identify his family! Am I right? Or they're half siblings.
Nina is Evan's sister! And Evan's using a different surname so people don't identify his family! Am I right? Or they're half siblings.
10/15/2011 c7 gulistala
Meeting with Jack Tuesday night? When Evan can make calls? This should very, very interesting.
Meeting with Jack Tuesday night? When Evan can make calls? This should very, very interesting.
9/26/2011 c14 MCM315
Hm, I'm not sure what to think of Jack. I want Talia with Evan, but I don't think it's the right time for them to get together yet, so...we'll see what happens. lol. Sorry, not much to say, so I'll just keep reading. :)
Thanks for the update despite what's going on in your life. I hope things are getting better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Hm, I'm not sure what to think of Jack. I want Talia with Evan, but I don't think it's the right time for them to get together yet, so...we'll see what happens. lol. Sorry, not much to say, so I'll just keep reading. :)
Thanks for the update despite what's going on in your life. I hope things are getting better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
9/22/2011 c14 Lucy Freebird
Her organ wants Evan lol. Great chapter.
Her organ wants Evan lol. Great chapter.