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7/7/2011 c1 Blushing.Violett
Well, of course, you know it

But I'm seeing those contradictions

You never hoped I would

Kkay, after texting you I read this baby twice-over. xD ~

It's burning, it's raging, it's spilling forth everything that's been brewing in a volcanic, subdued rush. c:

~You give, until there's nothing to give, until there's nothing to give, until there's nothing to give...~

That's my song of the week, and I'm sticking to it. x3 I think it fits nicely here, and overall this poem is an epic little piece of vent-age. I enjoyed it a lot! |)

Keep it up!

- Vio :D
7/7/2011 c1 31HK Shmetty
Wow, really good. Extremely powerful wording! Definately had an experience like this, where you just put so much of your love into someone (particularly a family member) and they just let you down. A lot of my writing ends up about THAT person, too. I know how you feel:( I really liked this poem though :)

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