for The Coming of Prince Garreth8/27/2017 c19 
1PirateNinjaV
This is amazing! I loved Garreth, and his family, and of course Belle and Chastity!
The relationships are great, they're so supportive and loving with each other. I think it's fantastic :D
I also think Belle and Garreth are perfect for each other 3
Thanks for writing!
1PirateNinjaVThis is amazing! I loved Garreth, and his family, and of course Belle and Chastity!
The relationships are great, they're so supportive and loving with each other. I think it's fantastic :D
I also think Belle and Garreth are perfect for each other 3
Thanks for writing!
3/21/2016 c2 Guest
You're you are
your possessive form.
You're inside the bookstore. (You are inside the bookstore.)
This is your bookstore. (The bookstore belongs to you.)
So, the sentence "You're outward appearance is changed, not your inner body." would be "YOUR outward appearance..." )
Hope that helps!
You're you are
your possessive form.
You're inside the bookstore. (You are inside the bookstore.)
This is your bookstore. (The bookstore belongs to you.)
So, the sentence "You're outward appearance is changed, not your inner body." would be "YOUR outward appearance..." )
Hope that helps!
5/8/2012 c1 Dragonwryn
hey you have a good story here...but (don't hate me for this) the plot line is eerily similar to "Captive Dreams" by Angela Knight and Diane Whiteside. so yeah ...its good but i have read a story like this before.
hey you have a good story here...but (don't hate me for this) the plot line is eerily similar to "Captive Dreams" by Angela Knight and Diane Whiteside. so yeah ...its good but i have read a story like this before.
4/6/2012 c3 confused
this belle/garreth thing is super confusing and makes no sense i would at least add author comments to help explain what is going on. is belle you the author or the author just to the story. too confusing and it would probably have more followers if the plot was clearer
this belle/garreth thing is super confusing and makes no sense i would at least add author comments to help explain what is going on. is belle you the author or the author just to the story. too confusing and it would probably have more followers if the plot was clearer
1/13/2012 c12 Miss Bee
Flair I'm Australian and just wanted to say a) so far I'm loving this story and b) we use a British Dictionary to so I'm right there with you on the spelling issue however I've noticed lately more and more kids starting to spell like an AMERICAN spelling colour and such words without a u and using x instead of s in words like realise etc! Australia and Canada says NO to poor grammar and spelling!
Flair I'm Australian and just wanted to say a) so far I'm loving this story and b) we use a British Dictionary to so I'm right there with you on the spelling issue however I've noticed lately more and more kids starting to spell like an AMERICAN spelling colour and such words without a u and using x instead of s in words like realise etc! Australia and Canada says NO to poor grammar and spelling!
1/5/2012 c18 1RedXButterflyXBlooming
This is an amazing story! I absoultely loved Garreth and Belle and Garreth's whole family along with Chasity! I couldn't stop reading this story! I kept reading until I read the last chapter! I'm looking forward to the other stories that go along with this one!
I also thought that both Garreth and Belle were perfect for each other! Fell in love with this story! Great job:)
1RedXButterflyXBloomingThis is an amazing story! I absoultely loved Garreth and Belle and Garreth's whole family along with Chasity! I couldn't stop reading this story! I kept reading until I read the last chapter! I'm looking forward to the other stories that go along with this one!
I also thought that both Garreth and Belle were perfect for each other! Fell in love with this story! Great job:)
11/8/2011 c19 4R. Ficst
Yay! Happy! I loved it! Great work, great story! I've been up for a very long time now and need sleep, so I won't say much more, but I wanted to tell you I think you're brilliant! I hope to read more from you, and I hope you enjoy your writing as much as I enjoy reading it!
4R. FicstYay! Happy! I loved it! Great work, great story! I've been up for a very long time now and need sleep, so I won't say much more, but I wanted to tell you I think you're brilliant! I hope to read more from you, and I hope you enjoy your writing as much as I enjoy reading it!
11/8/2011 c9 R. Ficst
okay, loving the story so far, and I have way more positive things to say than bad, but I usually give my review at the end of a story. I have to point out that you should really go back and re-read, or have someone beta this for typos and grammar. There have been a few word mix ups that Really need to be fixed. like the dog's "muzzle," not muscle. and she's "deluded," not diluted. BIG difference. please fix! other than stuff like this, I'm loving your writing style, voice, development, pace, characters, EVERYTHING! but the weird word swaps really grate on my nerves. sorry!
okay, loving the story so far, and I have way more positive things to say than bad, but I usually give my review at the end of a story. I have to point out that you should really go back and re-read, or have someone beta this for typos and grammar. There have been a few word mix ups that Really need to be fixed. like the dog's "muzzle," not muscle. and she's "deluded," not diluted. BIG difference. please fix! other than stuff like this, I'm loving your writing style, voice, development, pace, characters, EVERYTHING! but the weird word swaps really grate on my nerves. sorry!
10/17/2011 c17 darkgurl92
love ur story. :)
it's a good thing Artix and Raven are laid back parents and not strict wanting their sons to only marry high class demons.
update soon.:)
love ur story. :)
it's a good thing Artix and Raven are laid back parents and not strict wanting their sons to only marry high class demons.
update soon.:)