for The Coming of Prince Garreth9/12/2011 c13 abandoned due to FP Screw up
This is a wonderful story, the characters, particularly the play between Belle and Garreth, have me continuously checking for your next updates. Completely worth the wait though.
This is a wonderful story, the characters, particularly the play between Belle and Garreth, have me continuously checking for your next updates. Completely worth the wait though.
18/30/2011 c12 M
I wasn't referring to your British spelling (I'm Australian we use the British version too) I was referring to mistakes like:
"the moister of her mouth." = moisture
"his cayenne teeth" = canine
I wasn't referring to your British spelling (I'm Australian we use the British version too) I was referring to mistakes like:
"the moister of her mouth." = moisture
"his cayenne teeth" = canine
8/29/2011 c12 Tan
I love this story! you are lovely writer and I can't wait for the next chapter.
I love this story! you are lovely writer and I can't wait for the next chapter.
8/29/2011 c12 echo-echo
I've been reading and I like it. And I'm sorry, your note is hilarious! Can't wait for next chapter :)
echo echo
I've been reading and I like it. And I'm sorry, your note is hilarious! Can't wait for next chapter :)
echo echo
8/28/2011 c11 M
There is at least a dozen spelling mistakes in this chapter. You really need to read over it.
There is at least a dozen spelling mistakes in this chapter. You really need to read over it.
8/28/2011 c11 JBrooke
Loved it :) very spicy and steamy ;) can't wait for the next update!
P.S. I'm betting belle gets kidnapped or something? Is that the trigger? ;) lol
Loved it :) very spicy and steamy ;) can't wait for the next update!
P.S. I'm betting belle gets kidnapped or something? Is that the trigger? ;) lol
8/26/2011 c10 QuirkyGurl
"an empty tray and a clay picture. " I think you're looking for "picher"
"spent along time" you'll be wanting "a long"
Other than those minor errors, all cool. :)
"an empty tray and a clay picture. " I think you're looking for "picher"
"spent along time" you'll be wanting "a long"
Other than those minor errors, all cool. :)
8/26/2011 c10 JBrooke
Uh-oh lemon straight ahead :) lol. Love this story can't wait for the next update!
Uh-oh lemon straight ahead :) lol. Love this story can't wait for the next update!
8/18/2011 c9 JBrooke
Love it! Wonder what Belle didn't want Garreth to read? Can't wait to find out! Please update again soon :)
Love it! Wonder what Belle didn't want Garreth to read? Can't wait to find out! Please update again soon :)