for Exhuman5/23/2014 c1 wolfgang
I love the fridge logic at the end.
Saying its state is the result of surgery imply it can be done again and some people might/will want to have an "armie" of "perfect" programmer (no complain, more efficient, no accident...)
I love the fridge logic at the end.
Saying its state is the result of surgery imply it can be done again and some people might/will want to have an "armie" of "perfect" programmer (no complain, more efficient, no accident...)
7/11/2011 c1 
1K.H. Wright
Definitely needs more chapters. This has great potential and creates so many questions. I really hope you decide to continue this.
-K.H. Wright
1K.H. WrightDefinitely needs more chapters. This has great potential and creates so many questions. I really hope you decide to continue this.
-K.H. Wright
7/9/2011 c1 10Jeremy R Walker
I know you said it was a one shot but this has great potential for a larger story I would like to read it as a part of a larger story if you choose to write it Thank you for sharing your work
10Jeremy R WalkerI know you said it was a one shot but this has great potential for a larger story I would like to read it as a part of a larger story if you choose to write it Thank you for sharing your work