for Reeseistance is Futile5/30/2012 c1 Whatsoever
Woah, this was long, but i survived till the end, and let me say that i am glad that i did because i really liked this Humour is hard to pull off well but you did it. Kudos to you)
Woah, this was long, but i survived till the end, and let me say that i am glad that i did because i really liked this Humour is hard to pull off well but you did it. Kudos to you)
8/28/2011 c1 Guest
Wow, I LOVED this! Really good job because it's exceptionally hard to master humor. I squealed, you should write more Marie×Dylan/Mr,Fantasy Ruiner. It was good grammatically, and overall you should have a million thousand review cuz this story rocks!
And I beg one more time:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more Marie/Dylan!
Luv, zombie movies, and funny stories,
Pottergirl1(who has read this story four times today((seriously)))
Wow, I LOVED this! Really good job because it's exceptionally hard to master humor. I squealed, you should write more Marie×Dylan/Mr,Fantasy Ruiner. It was good grammatically, and overall you should have a million thousand review cuz this story rocks!
And I beg one more time:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more Marie/Dylan!
Luv, zombie movies, and funny stories,
Pottergirl1(who has read this story four times today((seriously)))
7/19/2011 c1 
11Liveey123348
QQ you make a new story and not update your others? *sniffle* ITS OKAY I LOVED THIS ONE TOO
It was sorta rushed but I found it cute and adorible, also VERY FUNNY~ As always to expect from you~^^;
Your my fav author always~~ :D :D :D
-Kaitlyn~3
K.I.T
Xoxo
11Liveey123348QQ you make a new story and not update your others? *sniffle* ITS OKAY I LOVED THIS ONE TOO
It was sorta rushed but I found it cute and adorible, also VERY FUNNY~ As always to expect from you~^^;
Your my fav author always~~ :D :D :D
-Kaitlyn~3
K.I.T
Xoxo
7/9/2011 c1 2Feithlinn
Nice ending! I certainly wasn't expecting that - turned it from an amusing but somewhat cliche romance story into a hilarious set-up. Very clever.
Speaking of clever, personally I found the best part of this story to be the dialogue. The characters show their personalities through their conversation without needing narrative description. All in all this was a very cute, fun, and enjoyable read. And, I might add, not too long for a short story. Any shorter and we wouldn't have gotten the same feeling for the characters.
2FeithlinnNice ending! I certainly wasn't expecting that - turned it from an amusing but somewhat cliche romance story into a hilarious set-up. Very clever.
Speaking of clever, personally I found the best part of this story to be the dialogue. The characters show their personalities through their conversation without needing narrative description. All in all this was a very cute, fun, and enjoyable read. And, I might add, not too long for a short story. Any shorter and we wouldn't have gotten the same feeling for the characters.