for So That's How it Feels7/9/2011 c1 Fragile Things
i think you should use the actual curse words instead of effing and a... it would add more real emotion and make it a stronger piece. it's more of a story than a poem but its nice work. keep writing.
i think you should use the actual curse words instead of effing and a... it would add more real emotion and make it a stronger piece. it's more of a story than a poem but its nice work. keep writing.