1/30/2012 c1 8Dark Blue Lover
"So you can go ahead and pretend to not remember." Love those last lines. The sense of confusion is relatable, and it went in a unique direction. Good job! Keep it up! ^.^
"So you can go ahead and pretend to not remember." Love those last lines. The sense of confusion is relatable, and it went in a unique direction. Good job! Keep it up! ^.^
7/9/2011 c1 Punslinger
This expresses very well the confused ambiguity that I think everyone feels at some time in a romantic entanglement. Shall I go or stay, or just spin around in cirles until I get dizzy and pass out?
This expresses very well the confused ambiguity that I think everyone feels at some time in a romantic entanglement. Shall I go or stay, or just spin around in cirles until I get dizzy and pass out?
7/9/2011 c1 Fragile Things
i love this. it went in a direction i did not expect. the ending was brilliant. very relatable piece as well.
i love this. it went in a direction i did not expect. the ending was brilliant. very relatable piece as well.