for Exiled: Hope2/23/2012 c19 Mariabelle
Hi, awww! I can't believe it's over :( I like the entire story although I should say it was pretty confusing at first :S and I also like the ending :) I think the last chapter went a little fast but you were able to point out the reasons why. I look forward to reading the prequel :) have you already started updating?
Hi, awww! I can't believe it's over :( I like the entire story although I should say it was pretty confusing at first :S and I also like the ending :) I think the last chapter went a little fast but you were able to point out the reasons why. I look forward to reading the prequel :) have you already started updating?
2/15/2012 c18 Mariabelle
Hi again, once again you've made a great chapter that leaves an impression. Is this the last chapter though? I sure hope not :S
Hi again, once again you've made a great chapter that leaves an impression. Is this the last chapter though? I sure hope not :S
2/11/2012 c17 Mariabelle
Hi just want to say I really like you're story and its concept. The grammar is also pretty good just watch out for some minor errors like in one part it said "I took a sit" it should be "I took a seat". You're writing is also very descriptive and apropriate- i cried in michael's death scene :(- please do update soon :D
Hi just want to say I really like you're story and its concept. The grammar is also pretty good just watch out for some minor errors like in one part it said "I took a sit" it should be "I took a seat". You're writing is also very descriptive and apropriate- i cried in michael's death scene :(- please do update soon :D
8/19/2011 c5 
1Delicious Cupcake
I really like this story. It's rather confusing, and I don't get what's going on completely, but that just makes me want to read more. Keep it up.
1Delicious CupcakeI really like this story. It's rather confusing, and I don't get what's going on completely, but that just makes me want to read more. Keep it up.