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10/29/2013 c1 Guest
I want more of this!
5/26/2012 c1 Jess
I honestly love this story. And all your other work. The writing style is fantastic, and it just has...I don't know. Real life circumstances, I guess. I love how she kind of pulled to hard, so the first kiss wasn't exactly perfect. I love how she was acting like a complete nutter because she was nervous as she was serving them ice cream, and I love how Sloane wasn't your typical hot boy. All those tiny flaws, the imperfections that you infused, make the character's lovable and so much more real, rather than the Barbie doll like personalities of most of the characters of the stories on here. And somehow, even though the characters you write have their little quirks and oddities, you still manage to make it an amazingly funny and cute read. So, yeah. That's all I really wanted to say. Please write more stories soon!

And also, my favorite line has to be about her logic flying out a window into her mother's mint garden. It's just such an odd, yet endearing, line.

And now I sound like an obsessed nut.

Great.
4/6/2012 c1 2Dreams-of-Fairies
BWAHAHAHAHAHA

awesome
1/14/2012 c1 ShadyRecords
Arghh...your endings are always like this.

I want more lovey-dovey intoxicating stuff lol

Just kidding. You are doing the short-story ending/clip-offs correct. I mean it is a classic style. Keep it up! =]
12/2/2011 c1 8literal.semicolon
lol... my sister always has some funny stuff in her favorites list! (That's LaughsWithTears, in case you might want to find something decent to read.)

Ah, how I missed you, FictionPress...
8/10/2011 c1 6LaughsWithTears
LOVE it. DIED laughing. :D
8/6/2011 c1 10balloonfista
LOL! Great story! Loved the last line :)

Ri

P.S. I think it's 'per se' :)
7/27/2011 c1 1Letham
THIS WAS SO CUTE. That last line was great.
7/27/2011 c1 kaymuhray
LOL ! Hahaha Priceless! ( I really did laugh and ppl looked at me funny so thanks a lot) I can't believe he said that I started asking myself y did he keep goin y didn't he stop y did he kiss her again what was going through his mind during both kisses or after the first y didn't she put his pov

But then I told myself not to worry because I loved the

story and it was perfectly cute and awesome

:) 3
7/26/2011 c1 kaymuhray
LOL ! Hahaha Priceless! ( I really did laugh and ppl looked at me funny so thanks a lot) I can't believe he said that I started asking myself y did he keep goin y didn't he stop y did he kiss her again what was going through his mind during both kisses or after the first y didn't she put his pov

But then I told myself not to worry because I loved the

story and it was perfectly cute and awesome

:) 3
7/20/2011 c1 Sophia Kay
Love.
7/18/2011 c1 AngelsXDevils
Lololololololololololol I totally did not expect him to say that at the end!
7/18/2011 c1 my infectious smile
Haha great last words...he can always teach her! Love your one shots!
7/18/2011 c1 Saya
But he came back for more. :D
7/18/2011 c1 1SweetAbyss
This was a great one shot! I absolutely loved the awkwardness of Lucy and the craziness of Angelica. And Sloane, we'll I may be biased since he's my type of guy, had the perfect line at the end.

Overall it was a great one shot and I'm glad I stopped to read it ^_^

Keep up the awesome work!

~Dustbunny~

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