Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Way To Set The Mood

8/28/2014 c1 1ShontelleiyaSherree
This is such a sweet story, beautifully written & constructed, with lots of feeling & insight into the personalities involved. I'm blind so I really do appreciate the way you have described the characters & actul events in such precise detail that I could actully half-imagine what was happening. THANKYOU. I loved the delightful way that her insecurities about so many peson features keep cropping up - references to her posture & way of walking, her poor eyesight & most especially her sensitivity over her straightened teeth & the possibility they may move & become crooked once more, hence the remarkable determination to keep wearing her retainers, all these features combine to portray a very sensitive & human character, while also underlaying the very understanding & loveing nature of her boyfriend. Very sweet indeed. Thankyou, love & kisses, always & forever, love from Shontelleiya xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
6/7/2012 c1 PoppySeeds
So, I'm terribly sorry to send you this message in a review (of your one shot, which I read and was very nice! I love that song, and love how you worked it into their dialogue. Also, I don't think I know the rest of the words either. I'm actually sitting here singing it in my head...nope, I don't. :) ANYWAY - FP did some changes to their website and it won't let me log in, so I can't reply to your PM properly and wanted to say thank you, I'm still here, I'm still alive, and unfortunately that chapter is STILL not finished. But someday it will be. :) If I'm able to log in later I'll send you another note with elaboration. :D
8/4/2011 c1 18ManiacalByMoonlight
daaah. beautiful story. (sorry failure of brain to come up with words for a proper review. :/ )

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service