for To Move On8/16/2011 c1 
5PessimisticApathy
This is so sad. I love the imagery and the depth to this story. It's sad and sweet. Good job.
5PessimisticApathyThis is so sad. I love the imagery and the depth to this story. It's sad and sweet. Good job.
7/24/2011 c1 6LeenMariexoxo
I like this story but I don't like the ending. It's a good ending it's just not my taste. I probably would've had Kaitlyn fall in love with Nick or something.
6LeenMariexoxoI like this story but I don't like the ending. It's a good ending it's just not my taste. I probably would've had Kaitlyn fall in love with Nick or something.
7/23/2011 c1 Silver Sparke
Whoa. I saw that coming, but it was done in a way that wasn't cliche at all, and I enjoyed reading it. The switches between point of view were a little confusing, but manageable.
Great job. :)
~Silver Sparke
Whoa. I saw that coming, but it was done in a way that wasn't cliche at all, and I enjoyed reading it. The switches between point of view were a little confusing, but manageable.
Great job. :)
~Silver Sparke