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7/26/2011 c1 outsidersgirl
this is great
7/23/2011 c1 12Gimme Back My Pigeon
to your friend:

good smut, though I find it cliche. if you would want more reviews - more favorites for it - I would spice it up a bit. throw in a different setting, different kind of characters, different things that happen, since usually you can find the same story littering different "Romance" stories in the category. also, grammar check. you've got spelling errors. Good luck with your writing.

-Chester.

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