for Love Of Lord Abel8/2/2011 c10 
18LadyOtilia
I thoroughly enjoyed your story and the manner you put an end to it is astonishing, given the fact that you used first person narrative. The story flows, the characters are alive. I'll read the sequel as well.
18LadyOtiliaI thoroughly enjoyed your story and the manner you put an end to it is astonishing, given the fact that you used first person narrative. The story flows, the characters are alive. I'll read the sequel as well.
8/1/2011 c10 13angellover254
OK...wow! That was surprising! I really thought they were gonna end up together...but still her and Cain (they liked each other too)..ah...I can't believe he did that! And to think I thought he was really sweet and nice in the beginning!
Like I said, I do't like sad endings, but this story was very well written, and I hope you will have a story that doesn't have a sad ending :/ (meaning both the main characters doesn't die)
All in all I liked this story! Good Job.
Also, thanks for putting the French Translations at the end!
13angellover254OK...wow! That was surprising! I really thought they were gonna end up together...but still her and Cain (they liked each other too)..ah...I can't believe he did that! And to think I thought he was really sweet and nice in the beginning!
Like I said, I do't like sad endings, but this story was very well written, and I hope you will have a story that doesn't have a sad ending :/ (meaning both the main characters doesn't die)
All in all I liked this story! Good Job.
Also, thanks for putting the French Translations at the end!
8/1/2011 c2 angellover254
I'm finding myself liking Abel a lot lol:]
Now she has to stay with him for a whole week? This will be interesting, can't wait to read how this turns out!
I'm finding myself liking Abel a lot lol:]
Now she has to stay with him for a whole week? This will be interesting, can't wait to read how this turns out!
8/1/2011 c1 angellover254
Thanks for reading my story Fated:]
I see that your story is a tragedy...which I really don't like, since I hate sad endings...but I'll still read it.
The first chapter, I found nice. When they were talking in french..I would of loved it...if you would of wrote the translations at the end of the chapter, so I would know what they were talking about.
It looks like the main character past wasn't so great, since her mother died when she was at a young age, and that her daddy turned ice cold..I hope this new guy named Abel...will help her. I can already tell their probably gonna be a couple...but I really really hope nothing horrible happens.
Well onto the next chapter!
Thanks for reading my story Fated:]
I see that your story is a tragedy...which I really don't like, since I hate sad endings...but I'll still read it.
The first chapter, I found nice. When they were talking in french..I would of loved it...if you would of wrote the translations at the end of the chapter, so I would know what they were talking about.
It looks like the main character past wasn't so great, since her mother died when she was at a young age, and that her daddy turned ice cold..I hope this new guy named Abel...will help her. I can already tell their probably gonna be a couple...but I really really hope nothing horrible happens.
Well onto the next chapter!
7/31/2011 c10 3Smartgirl94
Aww, thats so sad. But this was pretty good, I hope you have story and I hope they have a happy ending. See ya soon :D
3Smartgirl94Aww, thats so sad. But this was pretty good, I hope you have story and I hope they have a happy ending. See ya soon :D