for House of Eugene8/26/2011 c5 Paige
so im reviewing for chapter 4 now (finally) haha.
1. I just have to say like i wish this was real life so badly because its hilarious and would be so much fun
2. i lov ehow creepy jerome is but we all love him anyways it makes it so funny
3. arabella tackling him made me laugh so hard, and i could so picture her doing that (haha sorry arabella if youre reading this but its true :) )
4. the whole thing about his feet was hilarious.
5. as always great writing :)
i cant wait to read more...sorry this wasnt very descriptive im not in the mood to type too much hahaha
so im reviewing for chapter 4 now (finally) haha.
1. I just have to say like i wish this was real life so badly because its hilarious and would be so much fun
2. i lov ehow creepy jerome is but we all love him anyways it makes it so funny
3. arabella tackling him made me laugh so hard, and i could so picture her doing that (haha sorry arabella if youre reading this but its true :) )
4. the whole thing about his feet was hilarious.
5. as always great writing :)
i cant wait to read more...sorry this wasnt very descriptive im not in the mood to type too much hahaha
8/26/2011 c5 
1LadyLuly
I'm not gonna lie, this is perdy awesome! I was gonna tell you that I thought it needed to be on fanfiction dot net instead of FP, but I didn't see a House of Anubis section on there so... carry on.
1LadyLulyI'm not gonna lie, this is perdy awesome! I was gonna tell you that I thought it needed to be on fanfiction dot net instead of FP, but I didn't see a House of Anubis section on there so... carry on.
8/26/2011 c5 Arabella P
P.S- Okay this really is bad structure and poor planning but I forgot to say in my last review how I was fangirling over Jerome hehehe I wish he was real... In a way I hate you for taunting me with such fantasy but it's okay I love you too much to hate it or you... Did that make any sense? I'm just upset it's not real :(
P.S- Okay this really is bad structure and poor planning but I forgot to say in my last review how I was fangirling over Jerome hehehe I wish he was real... In a way I hate you for taunting me with such fantasy but it's okay I love you too much to hate it or you... Did that make any sense? I'm just upset it's not real :(
8/26/2011 c5 Arabella P
For one, I like writing more descriptive reviews, I'm sorry if it's just irrelevant ramble. But anyway.
Wow, Rahie! I really really love this House of Eugene idea, it's awesome! And thankfully, it's unsurprisingly well written...
I think that the story has taken a really interesting turn with this whole Jerome-not-really-what-he-seems-but-what-is-he plot, and well, you know I'm just obsessed with anything Jerome... Which brings me onto how much I love everybody's reactions to him! I think Prissy's really bold staying up in the cupboard like that, but I'm nervous to see her reaction after she is told about the blood (I'm also very curious about that), and it's interesting to see how some of us like Jerome and some of us don't trust him.
That bit where you mockingly posed that question about seeing Jerome's feet also had me cracking up at the screen hehe :)
It's genius how you seem to know us all so well haha! My reaction is probably DEAD on, in fact, I can verify that it is hahaha!
Could I just ask whereabouts is the House of Eugene: is it on school grounds, or in a forest, or where...?
The bit with Prissy and the blood on the shelf is rather morbid and dark (but I like that sort of thing so it's okay), and I really want to know what happens next, but you make sure you look after things more important to you before updating if you need.
I sadly can't offer any suggestions as to what could happen next, I'm not quite imaginative for that and I'm sure you've got it under control and I'm certain it'll be consistently good next time too! You put too much suspense in... Hehehe as the saying goes 'I'm craving for more'!
Good luck, as always, for your OChem II lab course you have today (I don't know when you'll catch this but the thought's there)
~Arabella
P.S. The plot really IS thickening in the famous words of well, Mr Clarke himself!
P.P.S. These P.S.es aren't added due to bad structure and poor planning as my English teacher may say, they were added as an afterthought. :)
LOVED IT!
For one, I like writing more descriptive reviews, I'm sorry if it's just irrelevant ramble. But anyway.
Wow, Rahie! I really really love this House of Eugene idea, it's awesome! And thankfully, it's unsurprisingly well written...
I think that the story has taken a really interesting turn with this whole Jerome-not-really-what-he-seems-but-what-is-he plot, and well, you know I'm just obsessed with anything Jerome... Which brings me onto how much I love everybody's reactions to him! I think Prissy's really bold staying up in the cupboard like that, but I'm nervous to see her reaction after she is told about the blood (I'm also very curious about that), and it's interesting to see how some of us like Jerome and some of us don't trust him.
That bit where you mockingly posed that question about seeing Jerome's feet also had me cracking up at the screen hehe :)
It's genius how you seem to know us all so well haha! My reaction is probably DEAD on, in fact, I can verify that it is hahaha!
Could I just ask whereabouts is the House of Eugene: is it on school grounds, or in a forest, or where...?
The bit with Prissy and the blood on the shelf is rather morbid and dark (but I like that sort of thing so it's okay), and I really want to know what happens next, but you make sure you look after things more important to you before updating if you need.
I sadly can't offer any suggestions as to what could happen next, I'm not quite imaginative for that and I'm sure you've got it under control and I'm certain it'll be consistently good next time too! You put too much suspense in... Hehehe as the saying goes 'I'm craving for more'!
Good luck, as always, for your OChem II lab course you have today (I don't know when you'll catch this but the thought's there)
~Arabella
P.S. The plot really IS thickening in the famous words of well, Mr Clarke himself!
P.P.S. These P.S.es aren't added due to bad structure and poor planning as my English teacher may say, they were added as an afterthought. :)
LOVED IT!
8/26/2011 c5 charn14
I would honestly scream like that to get people downstairs to eat. I'm not joking.=) Can't wait for the next chapter! =P
I would honestly scream like that to get people downstairs to eat. I'm not joking.=) Can't wait for the next chapter! =P
8/21/2011 c4 Jazzmyn
Love the idea :) Keeps you on your toes and is really well written. Can't wait to know what happens next!
Love the idea :) Keeps you on your toes and is really well written. Can't wait to know what happens next!
8/20/2011 c4 Eve Glass
Hey Rahie! This is really great! I can just see a bunch of girls all going dribbly as soon as they see the good-looking housekeeper. Mmm, imagine if it was real? Good folk lock up your daughters and... all your female relatives... Unless you want them to turn into brainless slaves. Haha! :)
Hey Rahie! This is really great! I can just see a bunch of girls all going dribbly as soon as they see the good-looking housekeeper. Mmm, imagine if it was real? Good folk lock up your daughters and... all your female relatives... Unless you want them to turn into brainless slaves. Haha! :)
8/4/2011 c4 charn14
I got giddy just reading this! Can't wait to see what else you have in store.
I got giddy just reading this! Can't wait to see what else you have in store.
8/4/2011 c4 Paige
OK I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS
i love reading about myself
i love the plot
i love all the characters
i love the writing
i love jerome clarke
but i agree i dont think he is how he seems (does that make sense haha?) i would love to be the first to realize that :)
ok also i find this hilarious...its like 7 fangirls living in a house together...and i just love it all like words cant explain
ok im gonna stop rambling
but its really really good :)
OK I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS
i love reading about myself
i love the plot
i love all the characters
i love the writing
i love jerome clarke
but i agree i dont think he is how he seems (does that make sense haha?) i would love to be the first to realize that :)
ok also i find this hilarious...its like 7 fangirls living in a house together...and i just love it all like words cant explain
ok im gonna stop rambling
but its really really good :)
8/4/2011 c4 Ducky doesn't wanna log in
Okay, this amuses me a lot. And half the time, people really cannot tell whether or not I'm being sarcastic. (:
Okay, this amuses me a lot. And half the time, people really cannot tell whether or not I'm being sarcastic. (:
8/4/2011 c4 4Ice-Princess-93
I think Jerome isn't what he seems.
BUT.
I love all our reactions to him.
Me kicking you in a gesture to shut up, Arabella freaking out, all of us mobbing him...
RAHIE.
YOU'RE AMAZING, AND I LOVE IT.
4Ice-Princess-93I think Jerome isn't what he seems.
BUT.
I love all our reactions to him.
Me kicking you in a gesture to shut up, Arabella freaking out, all of us mobbing him...
RAHIE.
YOU'RE AMAZING, AND I LOVE IT.