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7/12/2003 c1 32aulliana
Wow, this is a really sweet poem! I'm not Christian, but I used to be so I still get it, lol. I like the way you made it sound like something out of the Bible. That's very creative. ^_~ It kind of drags in the middle, but that's the only criticism I have. Keep writing! ~~Sm!lEz~~
10/23/2002 c1 Anni
I love this poem. It is really good. The only problem was that I only got about half the imagery. But then, your smart, and I'm tired.
5/25/2001 c1 Ariana
yay! i love that poem! it's beautiful, and if a poem can be that great, then how awesome will the real thing be? see ya there. ; )

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