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8/7/2011 c1 13VelvetyCheerio
Review courtesy of the Review Marathon. Link in my profile.

I really liked how you used the word "through" repeatedly in the second stanza. It gave me an image of movement and scene changes which was surprisingly refreshing.

I also liked the voice in this poem. The way the verses are set up, and the phrases used just add this air of melancholy to the whole poem. I felt like I was reading about a part of life that was moving on and leaving a dear friend behind.

Good job!

Velvet.

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