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11/17/2018 c1 4EpicRomanceLover27
You should keep going, this has potential
8/22/2011 c1 3Rosemarysgraden001
Well that was sad, I didnt want that guy to die lol. Im a pacifist...and his poor sister. i cant imagine killing someone after casually talking to them. The first bit was confusing, but then again im not much for politics.This story reminds me of bloody sunday by U2.

I like the details and the pace of it :). I dont really see grammar errors. Im interested to see where it goes. The name Jake Connelly is really cute, so are irish accents (Think jonathan rhys meyers).

~Rose~
8/11/2011 c1 Phoebe Powers
Okay, so I'm going to be completely honest here and please don't think I'm being mean or anything, because I want this to be a great story.

I did not like the first few paragraphs. Even with a story that is historical, it is not exactly nice to basically preach to the readers. We don't need you to teach us a history lesson at the beginning.

Once you started in with Jake and moved on from there I really enjoyed the story. I want to know more about Jake and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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