for Sugar Sweet8/13/2011 c1 
16Dragon made me do it
A really very cute and original story. perhaps, with an imagination like this, you could consider going into children's book writing.
16Dragon made me do itA really very cute and original story. perhaps, with an imagination like this, you could consider going into children's book writing.
8/12/2011 c1 17quasys
Freaking Amazing! I'm very glad those snakes don't actually exist... right? :D I loved Kevin and Janice! So typical yet so cute! :D:D:D:D
17quasysFreaking Amazing! I'm very glad those snakes don't actually exist... right? :D I loved Kevin and Janice! So typical yet so cute! :D:D:D:D
8/11/2011 c1 9Sonia VanDyke
*spoiler alert*
I love it :) Great Job. It was hilarious and suspenseful and just as i started to believe that the creature wouldn't bite/eat anyone... It did O.O haha. Keep up the Good Work Katalina :)
9Sonia VanDyke*spoiler alert*
I love it :) Great Job. It was hilarious and suspenseful and just as i started to believe that the creature wouldn't bite/eat anyone... It did O.O haha. Keep up the Good Work Katalina :)