
3/31/2013 c1
1mstormw
Its so simple and beautiful and pure. It's not overdone, it's exact and to the point, and yet still gently romantic :3 I really like your style :)
Keep writing!
Stormy x

Its so simple and beautiful and pure. It's not overdone, it's exact and to the point, and yet still gently romantic :3 I really like your style :)
Keep writing!
Stormy x
8/11/2011 c1
2Sheila Ibre
'simple' - all that needs to be said about this piece has already been encapsulated in the title and nothing more can compliment it; only applause.
I get a touch of a clean sentence brushed over the inexpressible feelings of love I have. You've admirably shaped the intangible heart into words, something most good writers try at least once.

'simple' - all that needs to be said about this piece has already been encapsulated in the title and nothing more can compliment it; only applause.
I get a touch of a clean sentence brushed over the inexpressible feelings of love I have. You've admirably shaped the intangible heart into words, something most good writers try at least once.
8/11/2011 c1
151ForeverBehindTheImpression
Beautiful. Beautiful, beautiful.
Love the simplicity and how clean cut it is, it's predictable, but not cliche, rather that you've done it in a different way, but it's the kind of thoughts that I already have, so it seems familiar. Do you know what I mean? Really love this. I agree so much. Beautiful use of language, and it's so hopeless and raw. Like you're trying to prove something so much.

Beautiful. Beautiful, beautiful.
Love the simplicity and how clean cut it is, it's predictable, but not cliche, rather that you've done it in a different way, but it's the kind of thoughts that I already have, so it seems familiar. Do you know what I mean? Really love this. I agree so much. Beautiful use of language, and it's so hopeless and raw. Like you're trying to prove something so much.