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3/31/2013 c1 1mstormw
Its so simple and beautiful and pure. It's not overdone, it's exact and to the point, and yet still gently romantic :3 I really like your style :)

Keep writing!

Stormy x
8/11/2011 c1 2Sheila Ibre
'simple' - all that needs to be said about this piece has already been encapsulated in the title and nothing more can compliment it; only applause.

I get a touch of a clean sentence brushed over the inexpressible feelings of love I have. You've admirably shaped the intangible heart into words, something most good writers try at least once.
8/11/2011 c1 151ForeverBehindTheImpression
Beautiful. Beautiful, beautiful.

Love the simplicity and how clean cut it is, it's predictable, but not cliche, rather that you've done it in a different way, but it's the kind of thoughts that I already have, so it seems familiar. Do you know what I mean? Really love this. I agree so much. Beautiful use of language, and it's so hopeless and raw. Like you're trying to prove something so much.

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