for Not By Blood9/20/2012 c12 eslover
Here I am again, needing to say THANK YOU for writing such a fun chapter for us to read. It's quite unselfish of you to be willing to share, lol! Anyway, I was thoroughly entertained...
I forgot what else I was going to say other than- Although I never saw the original description without "Oh boy, I guess the whole 'step-sibling' thing is effectively ruined" added, I will weigh in and say it should definitely stay :) I think it's lovely!
Here I am again, needing to say THANK YOU for writing such a fun chapter for us to read. It's quite unselfish of you to be willing to share, lol! Anyway, I was thoroughly entertained...
I forgot what else I was going to say other than- Although I never saw the original description without "Oh boy, I guess the whole 'step-sibling' thing is effectively ruined" added, I will weigh in and say it should definitely stay :) I think it's lovely!
9/20/2012 c10 eslover
OMG! I loved the interaction when she met Chris, he seems dreamy. I cannot wait to see how that develops, but I am going to be selfish for Astrid's sake (of course) and ask if she can have both Chris and Lucas, please?!
OMG! I loved the interaction when she met Chris, he seems dreamy. I cannot wait to see how that develops, but I am going to be selfish for Astrid's sake (of course) and ask if she can have both Chris and Lucas, please?!
9/20/2012 c8 eslover
I am glad that Courtney used to date Lucas and he seems uninterested, because the other scenario I guessed was she would start dating him in order to get at Astrid. Since Lucas is so popular I assumed one of those would have to be the case, and even though it was an obvious lapse in judgement that he was dating her at all (but, he was probably appreciative that she was easy at the time, I am assuming this of her at least- she seems the type) I really respect the fact that he left the vapid b- and doesn't even coinsider her invitation to get down and dirty because it wouldn't be worth dealing with her. Go Lucas, I really love these characters!
I am glad that Courtney used to date Lucas and he seems uninterested, because the other scenario I guessed was she would start dating him in order to get at Astrid. Since Lucas is so popular I assumed one of those would have to be the case, and even though it was an obvious lapse in judgement that he was dating her at all (but, he was probably appreciative that she was easy at the time, I am assuming this of her at least- she seems the type) I really respect the fact that he left the vapid b- and doesn't even coinsider her invitation to get down and dirty because it wouldn't be worth dealing with her. Go Lucas, I really love these characters!
9/20/2012 c5 eslover
I love that she still tries to raise an eyebrow even though she knows she cannot do it properly! I am also one of those people envious of those with the skill I do not possess.
I love that she still tries to raise an eyebrow even though she knows she cannot do it properly! I am also one of those people envious of those with the skill I do not possess.
9/20/2012 c4 eslover
I absolutely love the interaction between Astrid and Lucas, especially here when they seem to have let loose some and Astrid has been able to break him out of his shell, even if momentarily and only because she's amusing him (much to her dismay) with her inability to connect her mouth to her brain as quickly as she is used to.
I absolutely love the interaction between Astrid and Lucas, especially here when they seem to have let loose some and Astrid has been able to break him out of his shell, even if momentarily and only because she's amusing him (much to her dismay) with her inability to connect her mouth to her brain as quickly as she is used to.
9/20/2012 c2 eslover
I actually am really enjoying this story. I was afraid that Astrid was going to be too annoying, but so far she has not been. I appreciate that she knows how she comes across and that when she is being stubborn or ridiculous she only does it long enough to get her point across and then she's onto some new antics which at least are found amusing by her mother and apparently Jason too. I became a fan of Lucas as soon as it was said he had a deep husky voice, and I really thought his first remark to her was funny. OK, I'm going to read more, that's it for now (and maybe awhile)
I actually am really enjoying this story. I was afraid that Astrid was going to be too annoying, but so far she has not been. I appreciate that she knows how she comes across and that when she is being stubborn or ridiculous she only does it long enough to get her point across and then she's onto some new antics which at least are found amusing by her mother and apparently Jason too. I became a fan of Lucas as soon as it was said he had a deep husky voice, and I really thought his first remark to her was funny. OK, I'm going to read more, that's it for now (and maybe awhile)
9/18/2012 c16 cordelia
I don't mind not having the kiss, but can is PLEASE happen sometime soon? PLEASE UPDATE
I don't mind not having the kiss, but can is PLEASE happen sometime soon? PLEASE UPDATE
9/17/2012 c16 Robin
Pace of this story is EXTREMELY slow but I enjoyed astrid's sense of humor and wit so it wasnt too bad haha.
Pace of this story is EXTREMELY slow but I enjoyed astrid's sense of humor and wit so it wasnt too bad haha.
9/16/2012 c16 Guest
well I don't really like that sophie caught them right at that moment ya know but other than that I thought it was a good chapter. Also I like how there not declaring there love for eachother really soon cuz those stories kinda suck it's so much better when it builds up to the right moment so I don't think it was to soon for them to kiss and it's at an exciting part of the story now that they've realized there feeling something for eachother.
well I don't really like that sophie caught them right at that moment ya know but other than that I thought it was a good chapter. Also I like how there not declaring there love for eachother really soon cuz those stories kinda suck it's so much better when it builds up to the right moment so I don't think it was to soon for them to kiss and it's at an exciting part of the story now that they've realized there feeling something for eachother.
9/15/2012 c16 the purple ninja
omg, it tots think it's awesome, but u can redo the chapter, as long as it has the kiss in it, cuz that's the main point. anyway, u r awesome and so is ur story. it' HILARIOUS. i keep waiting 4 ur updates but they don't come fast enought... true, u can't do em every day... uh... brain fart... well, whatevs. PLEEEEZ keep th kiss, and is it sophie tht barges in?
omg, it tots think it's awesome, but u can redo the chapter, as long as it has the kiss in it, cuz that's the main point. anyway, u r awesome and so is ur story. it' HILARIOUS. i keep waiting 4 ur updates but they don't come fast enought... true, u can't do em every day... uh... brain fart... well, whatevs. PLEEEEZ keep th kiss, and is it sophie tht barges in?
9/14/2012 c16 
4whatthegreencarrot
AAH, YOU UPDATED! HOW COULD I MISS IT?
Heh, sorry about the late noticing or whatever you want to call it...hurhur. I noticed a couple of mistakes, like this -
[I know it sounds ridiculously cliché and stupid and 100% the sort of thing you read about and go, 'pfft, like you'd actually not be able to look away', but it was true] again, you have to stay in the right tense. You're doing past tense, so it should be "I know it sounded ridiculously cliche and stupid"... et cetera, et cetera. You get the point. There were other mistakes like that in there, but I won't point them out because my teachers oh-so-kindly decided that today was "Oh, look, let's go torture our students by piling homework on them" day. Cries.
[I swallowed before speaking, "You haven't lured me in here to murder me, have you?"
Smart one, Astrid.] LOL, I totally cracked up at that one. Yay, you made them kiss or make out or...I'll leave the visuals to you.
Whoa dere, awkward... Sophie walked in on them playing tonsil hockey? NO! (Audience in my head gasps in amazement.) With all sarcasm aside, that really must've been unsettling. I'd hate it if my bestie found me liplocked with my stepbro.
Your A/N's got me "Aww"ing. It wasn't a problem, even though I probably wasn't helping much with my endless rambling :3 I think I like Chris the best. But Astrid has me cracking up the most.
Thank God you updated, I was looking forward to a dull weekend. Looks like now I can reread and reread this chapter, all through Saturday and Sunday. Cheers!
4whatthegreencarrotAAH, YOU UPDATED! HOW COULD I MISS IT?
Heh, sorry about the late noticing or whatever you want to call it...hurhur. I noticed a couple of mistakes, like this -
[I know it sounds ridiculously cliché and stupid and 100% the sort of thing you read about and go, 'pfft, like you'd actually not be able to look away', but it was true] again, you have to stay in the right tense. You're doing past tense, so it should be "I know it sounded ridiculously cliche and stupid"... et cetera, et cetera. You get the point. There were other mistakes like that in there, but I won't point them out because my teachers oh-so-kindly decided that today was "Oh, look, let's go torture our students by piling homework on them" day. Cries.
[I swallowed before speaking, "You haven't lured me in here to murder me, have you?"
Smart one, Astrid.] LOL, I totally cracked up at that one. Yay, you made them kiss or make out or...I'll leave the visuals to you.
Whoa dere, awkward... Sophie walked in on them playing tonsil hockey? NO! (Audience in my head gasps in amazement.) With all sarcasm aside, that really must've been unsettling. I'd hate it if my bestie found me liplocked with my stepbro.
Your A/N's got me "Aww"ing. It wasn't a problem, even though I probably wasn't helping much with my endless rambling :3 I think I like Chris the best. But Astrid has me cracking up the most.
Thank God you updated, I was looking forward to a dull weekend. Looks like now I can reread and reread this chapter, all through Saturday and Sunday. Cheers!