for Not By Blood9/14/2012 c16 lostlamb
Well they're obviously in trouble now, but i think it's okay especially if they'll ignore their feelings for each for awhile. Then again i have no idea what I've talking about.
Well they're obviously in trouble now, but i think it's okay especially if they'll ignore their feelings for each for awhile. Then again i have no idea what I've talking about.
9/14/2012 c16 
3xXLonelyBeeXx
Keep it! i think they should get sophie not to tell and then while they're parents are away keep it going on the little relationship thing. Don't let them do the I love you thing i understand what you mean and when there parents get back they should catch them in the act... or something of that nature.
3xXLonelyBeeXxKeep it! i think they should get sophie not to tell and then while they're parents are away keep it going on the little relationship thing. Don't let them do the I love you thing i understand what you mean and when there parents get back they should catch them in the act... or something of that nature.
9/14/2012 c16 rayna
I liked it but it was a bit soon. Like they should still be in the denial /confusion state until like next chapter so they can get their heads straight and it won't just seem like rushed and reckless. But i love your characters and style so keep at it!
I liked it but it was a bit soon. Like they should still be in the denial /confusion state until like next chapter so they can get their heads straight and it won't just seem like rushed and reckless. But i love your characters and style so keep at it!
9/14/2012 c16 awesomegurl5467
Keep this chapter! it fits perfectly and it's amazing, just like this story!
Keep this chapter! it fits perfectly and it's amazing, just like this story!
9/14/2012 c16 fantasygurl1330
YAYYYZ! AN UPDATE!
I swear, a day before you updated, I remembered this story and wondered when you were going to update.
AND YOU UPDATED THE NEXT DAY!
sorry for caps. Im just rlly happeeee
YAYYYZ! AN UPDATE!
I swear, a day before you updated, I remembered this story and wondered when you were going to update.
AND YOU UPDATED THE NEXT DAY!
sorry for caps. Im just rlly happeeee
9/14/2012 c16 1Amy90
OMG - wow. Great chapter and I'm taking back most of the nasty things I said about Astrid - here she's just being cute and funny.
Please update soon - CAN'T wait to read more!
1Amy90OMG - wow. Great chapter and I'm taking back most of the nasty things I said about Astrid - here she's just being cute and funny.
Please update soon - CAN'T wait to read more!
9/14/2012 c12 Amy90
I'm not sure, I stopped reading last night because it got too late, so I started again today - and Astrid went on my nerves again. I guess it's because sometimes she's just overdoing it. She has to explain all her jokes again and again just to be sure everyone gets them. Often it has long stopped being cool and funny by then.
And the way she's acting, she seems to be a 15-year-old (and that's the maximum age I'd give her) most of the time, not a 17-year-old. Sometimes, she's behaving just too childish. I mean, take the phone stuff - she starts singing and dancing whenever her phone rings (playing the song she picked herself) instead of just answering although she could listen to Nickelback every freaking second of her life if she wanted to and she knows perfectly well that there's someone wanting to talk to her. And on top of that she's even proudly telling this as if this was something super cool. I think you're just overdoing it a bit, and I'd prefer you'd write Astrid just a bit cooler - the way she sometimes seems to be. Some of her comments are actually uber cool and funny and really witty, and I wish she was like this ALL the time.
I'm not sure, I stopped reading last night because it got too late, so I started again today - and Astrid went on my nerves again. I guess it's because sometimes she's just overdoing it. She has to explain all her jokes again and again just to be sure everyone gets them. Often it has long stopped being cool and funny by then.
And the way she's acting, she seems to be a 15-year-old (and that's the maximum age I'd give her) most of the time, not a 17-year-old. Sometimes, she's behaving just too childish. I mean, take the phone stuff - she starts singing and dancing whenever her phone rings (playing the song she picked herself) instead of just answering although she could listen to Nickelback every freaking second of her life if she wanted to and she knows perfectly well that there's someone wanting to talk to her. And on top of that she's even proudly telling this as if this was something super cool. I think you're just overdoing it a bit, and I'd prefer you'd write Astrid just a bit cooler - the way she sometimes seems to be. Some of her comments are actually uber cool and funny and really witty, and I wish she was like this ALL the time.
9/14/2012 c16 1Up With the Birds
alksngasdlkghnasdfg THE FEELS! I read the title of the chapter and fangirled, then read to your author's note and fangirled again. Jeez. *ahem* Let's try and save the last sliver of dignity I have left, yeah? ...THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATING... I THOUGHT I WAS GOING TO LOSE MY MIND! Gah, I just can't even with this...
1Up With the Birdsalksngasdlkghnasdfg THE FEELS! I read the title of the chapter and fangirled, then read to your author's note and fangirled again. Jeez. *ahem* Let's try and save the last sliver of dignity I have left, yeah? ...THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATING... I THOUGHT I WAS GOING TO LOSE MY MIND! Gah, I just can't even with this...
9/13/2012 c16 2worthwritingfor
I really like it, but it was a little too soon :/ Nice job, though! You're very talented! ;)
-YouJustMight
2worthwritingforI really like it, but it was a little too soon :/ Nice job, though! You're very talented! ;)
-YouJustMight
9/13/2012 c9 1Amy90
I don't think there's anything wrong with the title. It fits the story perfectly.
Geez, can't believe you got 328 reviews already, I think I should stop writing, I feel like I'm spoiling you. :P
1Amy90I don't think there's anything wrong with the title. It fits the story perfectly.
Geez, can't believe you got 328 reviews already, I think I should stop writing, I feel like I'm spoiling you. :P
9/13/2012 c7 Amy90
I feel like Astrid grew up a little bit during the last chapters. Or I've just gotten used to her rude way. Anyway, although I didn't want to, I really like her now. However you did that, it's amazing. ;)
I feel like Astrid grew up a little bit during the last chapters. Or I've just gotten used to her rude way. Anyway, although I didn't want to, I really like her now. However you did that, it's amazing. ;)
9/13/2012 c6 Amy90
ROFL... Astrid is just hilarious! And I'm starting to like her more and more. The way she continually keeps shutting off Bryce is just golden! And Lucas is just cute. Plus, I'd definitely fall for his car, too. ;)
ROFL... Astrid is just hilarious! And I'm starting to like her more and more. The way she continually keeps shutting off Bryce is just golden! And Lucas is just cute. Plus, I'd definitely fall for his car, too. ;)