for Not By Blood9/13/2012 c3 
1Amy90
I like the characters but Astrid is a bit too full of herself and she's bubbling way too much. But I guess that's her flaw, so let's wait how it turns out. And I really do appreciate the sarcasm. ;)
1Amy90I like the characters but Astrid is a bit too full of herself and she's bubbling way too much. But I guess that's her flaw, so let's wait how it turns out. And I really do appreciate the sarcasm. ;)
9/13/2012 c2 Amy90
I think Astrid is behaving VERY immature but at the age of 17 and in her situation she might be allowed to do so. ;) Anyway, reading this is a bit like watching "The office" - you're constantly feeling embarassed for how she behaves. :D
I think Astrid is behaving VERY immature but at the age of 17 and in her situation she might be allowed to do so. ;) Anyway, reading this is a bit like watching "The office" - you're constantly feeling embarassed for how she behaves. :D
9/13/2012 c16 1Nalledia
Don't you DARE change this chapter! It was such a perfect chapter, in my opinion! :D I'm always happy to see another chapter update in my inbox!:D
1NallediaDon't you DARE change this chapter! It was such a perfect chapter, in my opinion! :D I'm always happy to see another chapter update in my inbox!:D
9/12/2012 c16 1Fanatical Dreamer
Nice chapter! And I'm just happy you decided to update!
I actually like the way you've written the summary into the chapter :-D. My immediate reaction when I realised it was in this chapter was: YES! It's here! Life is complete! And then it was: Sophie? Aww... It's over...
So yeah... Anyway, update soon!
1Fanatical DreamerNice chapter! And I'm just happy you decided to update!
I actually like the way you've written the summary into the chapter :-D. My immediate reaction when I realised it was in this chapter was: YES! It's here! Life is complete! And then it was: Sophie? Aww... It's over...
So yeah... Anyway, update soon!
9/12/2012 c16 Guest
Okay, first of all, wow. That was just a rush. In my opinion, I think it all came too quickly. They just started easing into their emotions and then all of a sudden, BAM, they're making out. I would've given it a few more chapters, in which they realize their infatuation (or maybe just Astrid, I'm fairly sure that Lucas already would've known) and things start to get awkward for Astrod because she's realized it. Then I guess go on from that.
But don't get me wrong! I loved it! I love Lucas and Astrid together as much as I love chocolate(I really love chocolate btw)! They're my OTP at the moment. I totally ship them as a couple! I just thought that it was just a bit rushed into the moment. But I guess I'm being to critical. You're the author, do whatever you like. I'll still love it no matter what! :D
Okay, first of all, wow. That was just a rush. In my opinion, I think it all came too quickly. They just started easing into their emotions and then all of a sudden, BAM, they're making out. I would've given it a few more chapters, in which they realize their infatuation (or maybe just Astrid, I'm fairly sure that Lucas already would've known) and things start to get awkward for Astrod because she's realized it. Then I guess go on from that.
But don't get me wrong! I loved it! I love Lucas and Astrid together as much as I love chocolate(I really love chocolate btw)! They're my OTP at the moment. I totally ship them as a couple! I just thought that it was just a bit rushed into the moment. But I guess I'm being to critical. You're the author, do whatever you like. I'll still love it no matter what! :D
9/12/2012 c16 1Let The Wings Soar
if you change this chapter I. will. KILL. you. This was NOT too soon and yes I was hating you for not updating. You left me hanging! but now I'm happy, this was great. I'm like, YAY THEY FINALLY GOT AROUND TO KISSING!
1Let The Wings Soarif you change this chapter I. will. KILL. you. This was NOT too soon and yes I was hating you for not updating. You left me hanging! but now I'm happy, this was great. I'm like, YAY THEY FINALLY GOT AROUND TO KISSING!
9/12/2012 c16 2UpDownLeftRight
No, I didn't like this chapter. I friggin' loved it! I love Astrid and Lucas together!(: more more more
2UpDownLeftRightNo, I didn't like this chapter. I friggin' loved it! I love Astrid and Lucas together!(: more more more
9/12/2012 c16 2VanessaSt.Clair
French the llama! Dear great lord of heaven, I WANT A KISS LIKE THAT! And this was not too soon, believe me, it was too late. I kept waiting and waiting for SOMETHING to happen between those two. I mean, come on. You've got 16 long chapters and they haven't kissed till now? Don't get me wrong, this was actually the perfect time to heat things up with them but- okay, what im trying to say is: your not putting the kiss in too soon.
Anywho! Awesome chapter. Thank you for being awesome.
2VanessaSt.ClairFrench the llama! Dear great lord of heaven, I WANT A KISS LIKE THAT! And this was not too soon, believe me, it was too late. I kept waiting and waiting for SOMETHING to happen between those two. I mean, come on. You've got 16 long chapters and they haven't kissed till now? Don't get me wrong, this was actually the perfect time to heat things up with them but- okay, what im trying to say is: your not putting the kiss in too soon.
Anywho! Awesome chapter. Thank you for being awesome.
9/12/2012 c16 4courtnestle
i really liked it and it fit really well with the rest of the story. you don't need to change it unless the rest of the story doesnt fit well. its up to you really, but i really enjoy this story.
4courtnestlei really liked it and it fit really well with the rest of the story. you don't need to change it unless the rest of the story doesnt fit well. its up to you really, but i really enjoy this story.
9/12/2012 c16 RubyRed22
FINALLY! I'VE BEEN WAITING SO LONG FOR THIS! Okay, let me start by saying I really love this story. I think Lucas and Astrid are just so perfect together, and OHMYGOSHHHH, THE CHEMISTRY! I think they're a really interesting but cute pair, what with the eccentric Astrid and cool-guy Lucas!... I honestly have a strange love for secret relationships, then seeing them get caught! (Don't ask me why, I'm just as weird as Astrid!) Though I never thought they'd be caught so soon!
Haha, well I'd love to see more! Update soon!
FINALLY! I'VE BEEN WAITING SO LONG FOR THIS! Okay, let me start by saying I really love this story. I think Lucas and Astrid are just so perfect together, and OHMYGOSHHHH, THE CHEMISTRY! I think they're a really interesting but cute pair, what with the eccentric Astrid and cool-guy Lucas!... I honestly have a strange love for secret relationships, then seeing them get caught! (Don't ask me why, I'm just as weird as Astrid!) Though I never thought they'd be caught so soon!
Haha, well I'd love to see more! Update soon!
9/12/2012 c16 5SpideyFreakingNinja
This chapter was really great! I really got the explosion of emotion when Lucas finally kissed Astrid! Keep it up!
5SpideyFreakingNinjaThis chapter was really great! I really got the explosion of emotion when Lucas finally kissed Astrid! Keep it up!
9/12/2012 c16 12TasteTheFreakingRainbow
It's perfecto :D I have been waiting for the big summary moment and this actually does seem like a pretty good time for it. :D
12TasteTheFreakingRainbowIt's perfecto :D I have been waiting for the big summary moment and this actually does seem like a pretty good time for it. :D
9/12/2012 c16 1funnechick
It's chapter 16, so I'd say it's not too early for this scene. I've literally been waiting for it since the story began, so I might be a little biased on that, haha.
I hope you keep it in, but that's your decision. I loved it!
1funnechickIt's chapter 16, so I'd say it's not too early for this scene. I've literally been waiting for it since the story began, so I might be a little biased on that, haha.
I hope you keep it in, but that's your decision. I loved it!