for Not By Blood9/16/2011 c4 
13angellover254
awesome story so far! I just love the MC's personality...can't wait for the next chapter! Update when you can please!
13angellover254awesome story so far! I just love the MC's personality...can't wait for the next chapter! Update when you can please!
9/2/2011 c3 Nash
hey love this story so different form the others that are like this i lik- no LOVE -where it's going!
keep it up and hope you upload soooooooonn! :D
hey love this story so different form the others that are like this i lik- no LOVE -where it's going!
keep it up and hope you upload soooooooonn! :D
8/29/2011 c3 1Germany
Oh! Haha, I didn't know there was third chapter (otherwise I would've read on). Forgive me, it had been late when I was reading this so I probably wasn't thinking all too clearly... plus it explains why my review on chapter 2 sounded lame XD
Anyways, I liked this chapter as well :) I am curious to know how the two will get to the point that they did in the summary. Also, I'm guessing Astrid is seventeen then?
1GermanyOh! Haha, I didn't know there was third chapter (otherwise I would've read on). Forgive me, it had been late when I was reading this so I probably wasn't thinking all too clearly... plus it explains why my review on chapter 2 sounded lame XD
Anyways, I liked this chapter as well :) I am curious to know how the two will get to the point that they did in the summary. Also, I'm guessing Astrid is seventeen then?
8/28/2011 c2 Germany
Haha, the Harry Potter part was cute/funny. I am interested to see where this will go...so happy writing :)
Haha, the Harry Potter part was cute/funny. I am interested to see where this will go...so happy writing :)
8/17/2011 c2 debut.critique
Good job! This chapter was a fun read. I sense the interaction between Astrid and Lucas are going to be highly entertaining. :P
Good job! This chapter was a fun read. I sense the interaction between Astrid and Lucas are going to be highly entertaining. :P
8/17/2011 c2 18FreekyDisaster18
Well that had me laughing out loud at so many moments! Astrid is a fantastic main character and such a breath of fresh air compared to most heroines in romance stories. I love it and can't wait for more chapters!
18FreekyDisaster18Well that had me laughing out loud at so many moments! Astrid is a fantastic main character and such a breath of fresh air compared to most heroines in romance stories. I love it and can't wait for more chapters!
8/16/2011 c2 Halleeee
I really like Astrid's character !
And, I just thought you should know, that I'm one of those people that picks out every flaw she can see from a piece of writing. And yours had none. CONGRADULATIONS. :D
I can't wait to read more. (:
I really like Astrid's character !
And, I just thought you should know, that I'm one of those people that picks out every flaw she can see from a piece of writing. And yours had none. CONGRADULATIONS. :D
I can't wait to read more. (:
8/16/2011 c2 4ALw4y5.Inn0c3nt
I love Astrid, she's so awesome and funny! XD Anyways please update soon! :D
4ALw4y5.Inn0c3ntI love Astrid, she's so awesome and funny! XD Anyways please update soon! :D