8/16/2011 c2 4Emmaa x
sooooooo, my internet finally decided to work :D
anyway, i love it!
particularly:
"Woo, my taste buds can finally broaden their knowledge of food"
;)
sooooooo, my internet finally decided to work :D
anyway, i love it!
particularly:
"Woo, my taste buds can finally broaden their knowledge of food"
;)
8/16/2011 c2 Oedipa
I'm really liking this so far. Your characterization of Astrid is very strong and definitely comes through in the narration-she's not exactly what you'd think of as "likeable", but I like her. The Harry Potter password thing, BTW, made me laugh.
Looking forward to seeing more here.
I'm really liking this so far. Your characterization of Astrid is very strong and definitely comes through in the narration-she's not exactly what you'd think of as "likeable", but I like her. The Harry Potter password thing, BTW, made me laugh.
Looking forward to seeing more here.
8/15/2011 c1 4Emmaa x
BOO!
sooooooooooooo, u actually need to update this like soon ;)
did u no that i'm on the phone to you right now...lol
BOO!
sooooooooooooo, u actually need to update this like soon ;)
did u no that i'm on the phone to you right now...lol
8/14/2011 c1 18FreekyDisaster18
Intriguing start and I can already sense the drama to come! More soon, please!
Intriguing start and I can already sense the drama to come! More soon, please!
8/14/2011 c1 debut.critique
Hello Mia!
Your story seems pretty cool.I really like Astrid's character, or at least the little glimpse we've gotten of her personality so far. Damsels in distress tend to annoy me. ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Hello Mia!
Your story seems pretty cool.I really like Astrid's character, or at least the little glimpse we've gotten of her personality so far. Damsels in distress tend to annoy me. ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)