for Not By Blood5/6/2013 c23 
1Nalledia
Lolz!X3 Sounds like one helluvah party they had going there! I wonder what Lucas isn't telling her… should be good. And I'm SO happy to get another chapter of this!:D:D I missed it so much!
1NallediaLolz!X3 Sounds like one helluvah party they had going there! I wonder what Lucas isn't telling her… should be good. And I'm SO happy to get another chapter of this!:D:D I missed it so much!
5/5/2013 c23 Guest
So I just realized that Demi Lovato's "Heart Attack" can probably fit Astrid somehow haha I don't know if you'd agree with me but I just thought of it while I was eating breakfast and the song was on my head. I don't know why I even thought of that all of the sudden. I'm weird like that. Just wanted to share with you this moment of weirdness I had this morning. Anyway, hope you update soon! I'm really looking forward for more.
So I just realized that Demi Lovato's "Heart Attack" can probably fit Astrid somehow haha I don't know if you'd agree with me but I just thought of it while I was eating breakfast and the song was on my head. I don't know why I even thought of that all of the sudden. I'm weird like that. Just wanted to share with you this moment of weirdness I had this morning. Anyway, hope you update soon! I'm really looking forward for more.
5/3/2013 c23 Guest
Just started reading a few days ago and I loved it! Hope you update soon!
Just started reading a few days ago and I loved it! Hope you update soon!
5/2/2013 c23 5wasauskyx
its fine! i loved this nonetheless even if it WAS short. update soon an i really liked the reference to transformers.
5wasauskyxits fine! i loved this nonetheless even if it WAS short. update soon an i really liked the reference to transformers.
5/1/2013 c23 2flep
It didn't suck! It was awesome, especially the ending. And I love procrastinating too, I mean; I'm procrastinating right now. SO IT'S YOUR FAULT IF I DON'T DO WELL ON MY SCIENCE TEST! (Not really.) I can't do work. It's something I cannot do for my life.
2flepIt didn't suck! It was awesome, especially the ending. And I love procrastinating too, I mean; I'm procrastinating right now. SO IT'S YOUR FAULT IF I DON'T DO WELL ON MY SCIENCE TEST! (Not really.) I can't do work. It's something I cannot do for my life.
5/1/2013 c23 1Up With the Birds
You do suck, but this chapter was fabulous as always, so I forgive you. :-) You actually liked Americaland? Wow. I went to London over spring break and LOVED it; there may be a possible move after college. Anyway, thanks for FINALLY updating, it was awesome. :-D
1Up With the BirdsYou do suck, but this chapter was fabulous as always, so I forgive you. :-) You actually liked Americaland? Wow. I went to London over spring break and LOVED it; there may be a possible move after college. Anyway, thanks for FINALLY updating, it was awesome. :-D
5/1/2013 c23 marginal-utility
Its not incest to fall for your own character. Every writer has one of two connections with their main characters; s/he identifies with a character, or is in love with them.
Its not incest to fall for your own character. Every writer has one of two connections with their main characters; s/he identifies with a character, or is in love with them.
4/30/2013 c23 Guest
Loved it update soon
Loved it update soon
4/30/2013 c23 Ravan Rose
OMGGGGGGGGG! This is the best storyyyyy everrrrrrr...i loved it, i loved it, i love it. It was AMAZING, SWEET, FANTASTIC, ADORABLE, FUNNY, no it was HILARIOUS, and the chemistry between Lucas and Astrid- OH MAH LAWD JEZUZBUHJEZUS! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERRRRR! SO, please, please, please. HURRY UP.
Love,
Your most biggest fan :)
P.S I ADMIRE YOUR BRAIN. hehehehehe
OMGGGGGGGGG! This is the best storyyyyy everrrrrrr...i loved it, i loved it, i love it. It was AMAZING, SWEET, FANTASTIC, ADORABLE, FUNNY, no it was HILARIOUS, and the chemistry between Lucas and Astrid- OH MAH LAWD JEZUZBUHJEZUS! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERRRRR! SO, please, please, please. HURRY UP.
Love,
Your most biggest fan :)
P.S I ADMIRE YOUR BRAIN. hehehehehe
4/30/2013 c23 4courtnestle
i really like Astrid as a character. she has really grown as a character and you have grown as a writer. good job!
4courtnestlei really like Astrid as a character. she has really grown as a character and you have grown as a writer. good job!
4/30/2013 c23 1blakbird0019
Hey, don't feel bad. All I care about is that you updated. It's nice to see that you still live :P OH, and sorry that this is my first time reviewing. I've been following this story for a while. I'm just kinda lazy when it comes to actually reviewing, but I'm trying to make it a point to review at least once on each of the stories I'm following now. I know how bad it feels to not have people review and I just recently had a (kind-of) epiphany, I guess you'd call it. I realized that I'm one of those jerk-faces who doesn't review haha. I get mad at all these other people and here I am, one of THEM (duh duh duuuuhhhhh). Sooo anywho, I'm trying to make up for it by doing an overall-review here. I think that this story is pretty amazing. I was pretty much hooked from the get-go. As soon as I began reading it months ago, I just couldn't stop reading until I was caught all the way up to where you'd stopped. The chemistry between Astrid and Lucas is great. They get along so well and have these feelings for each other that makes me feel so happy inside haha. Ummm... and I like how funny everything in here is. It's always nice to read something labeled "Humor" that is actually funny. I love how Astrid is so childish sometimes and is totally aware of it but doesn't care. It's great how she doesn't worry about what other people think about her and just goes on doing her own thing. I just love her character. Keep up the good work :) And sorry again that some of this is probably old news for you. I should've said this stuff sooner, but hey, better late than never :)
1blakbird0019Hey, don't feel bad. All I care about is that you updated. It's nice to see that you still live :P OH, and sorry that this is my first time reviewing. I've been following this story for a while. I'm just kinda lazy when it comes to actually reviewing, but I'm trying to make it a point to review at least once on each of the stories I'm following now. I know how bad it feels to not have people review and I just recently had a (kind-of) epiphany, I guess you'd call it. I realized that I'm one of those jerk-faces who doesn't review haha. I get mad at all these other people and here I am, one of THEM (duh duh duuuuhhhhh). Sooo anywho, I'm trying to make up for it by doing an overall-review here. I think that this story is pretty amazing. I was pretty much hooked from the get-go. As soon as I began reading it months ago, I just couldn't stop reading until I was caught all the way up to where you'd stopped. The chemistry between Astrid and Lucas is great. They get along so well and have these feelings for each other that makes me feel so happy inside haha. Ummm... and I like how funny everything in here is. It's always nice to read something labeled "Humor" that is actually funny. I love how Astrid is so childish sometimes and is totally aware of it but doesn't care. It's great how she doesn't worry about what other people think about her and just goes on doing her own thing. I just love her character. Keep up the good work :) And sorry again that some of this is probably old news for you. I should've said this stuff sooner, but hey, better late than never :)
4/30/2013 c23 2BookReader88
:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))) i loved it! no really action between lucas and astrid but still great dont wrry i understand y!
2BookReader88:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))) i loved it! no really action between lucas and astrid but still great dont wrry i understand y!
4/30/2013 c23 Lullay
At last, a chapter !
I was going to put this into my never-to-see-an-end fictions.
Well...update soon because there's not much to say XD
At last, a chapter !
I was going to put this into my never-to-see-an-end fictions.
Well...update soon because there's not much to say XD