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8/14/2011 c1 151ForeverBehindTheImpression
I really adore this poem, the rhyme seems like an overkill, but it isn't, because there's something about it that isn't forced at all, and therefore, it's really wonderful. I love how you've tied it all to that ending, which I'm assuming is a quote from somewhere. Gorgeous work :)
8/14/2011 c1 36Sita Fuoco
I really love the metaphor, but of course i I would /i. Very night job with the rhyme scheme, I liked how the poem itself read. I always did like your style, it's quick and fun to hear.

Keep it up, of course. :)

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