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9/14/2011 c1 3imaginitivewriter
I liked the simplicity of how you described love as a two fold, because when using less words to describe something, it affects me stronger.

I also like how you compared it to tangible things like fire, shoes, and gold, because it then becomes easier to visualize and even relate to.
9/1/2011 c1 15disrhythmic
Really, really great, and painfully true. You have lovely imagery going on here, and I like the format. It kind of has this rhythmic quality to it, if that makes any sense (and it's pretty ironic coming from someone whose username is disrhythmic -.-) Anyway, I really enjoyed this. ^^

[It kisses you...

...and sucks away the very essence of your soul, the very reason you choose to live, leaving you emptier than a ghost town.]

My favorite line. ^^
8/18/2011 c1 43Dark Sunset
Nice job! This is very true, all very true, and portrayed well. It puts the feeling into words. It's both wonderful and terrible. Sometimes more one than the other, but always true.

~Dark Sunset
8/18/2011 c1 1Sentio Infirmum
Beautiful job- rich description, and intruiging interpretation of this complex and startling emotion.

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