for The Blind Side2/2/2012 c14 use.less.woman
This was a good story. I didnt notice any errors as far as spelling or grammer. The storyline was good and the characters were easy to like. It throws me off that he has red eyes. It is hard to find that attractive. But I like the story overall. I did kind of hope Catherine got hit by a bus or something :) but seriously your ending was so sweet.
This was a good story. I didnt notice any errors as far as spelling or grammer. The storyline was good and the characters were easy to like. It throws me off that he has red eyes. It is hard to find that attractive. But I like the story overall. I did kind of hope Catherine got hit by a bus or something :) but seriously your ending was so sweet.
1/20/2012 c14 moonlightnights
not sure if you'll see this, but the whole thing was SO CUTE 3
its funny, i was listening to More than this by One Direction (http:/www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ley0_wH4MQ&feature=related) before i read this chapter, and the overall feel of both songs fit really well :)
Best Wishes,
Moonlightnights
not sure if you'll see this, but the whole thing was SO CUTE 3
its funny, i was listening to More than this by One Direction (http:/www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ley0_wH4MQ&feature=related) before i read this chapter, and the overall feel of both songs fit really well :)
Best Wishes,
Moonlightnights
1/17/2012 c8 Oboe Jenkins
What do you mean red eyes? Also I really like this story :)
What do you mean red eyes? Also I really like this story :)
10/1/2011 c13 HeyyyitsPickle
I just read chapters 1-13 straight and i seriously felt like crying. This is suchhhh a good storyy! i love it
I just read chapters 1-13 straight and i seriously felt like crying. This is suchhhh a good storyy! i love it
9/15/2011 c9 Liz
This story is very similar to the Korean drama, A Love To Kill. Did you get the idea from that, by any chance?
This story is very similar to the Korean drama, A Love To Kill. Did you get the idea from that, by any chance?
9/15/2011 c2 
1Miryo
It still feels kind of rushed and could use some more details and descriptions here and there to make it feel more real. That, and it seems like every other episode begins with the word "I". It might benefit to change that up a bit. But nevertheless, I'm enjoying the story itself. It's an interesting twist that Leia is blind. So here I was thinking Josh was the poor victim, but it looks like he might not be so innocent after all. Nice twist.
1MiryoIt still feels kind of rushed and could use some more details and descriptions here and there to make it feel more real. That, and it seems like every other episode begins with the word "I". It might benefit to change that up a bit. But nevertheless, I'm enjoying the story itself. It's an interesting twist that Leia is blind. So here I was thinking Josh was the poor victim, but it looks like he might not be so innocent after all. Nice twist.
9/15/2011 c1 Miryo
It feels a little rushed, but it's still caught my attention. I'm curious as to how Lea drove Josh to such depression and I'm even more curious as to how Nate's going to make her pay. Interesting premise.
It feels a little rushed, but it's still caught my attention. I'm curious as to how Lea drove Josh to such depression and I'm even more curious as to how Nate's going to make her pay. Interesting premise.
8/30/2011 c1 Clarissa Rose
This is really good! I'm hooked already! Please upadte soon:)
-Clarissa Rose
This is really good! I'm hooked already! Please upadte soon:)
-Clarissa Rose