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9/1/2011 c2 1LadyLuly
Coolio, I'm excited to see what happens. I wonder if the Ringmaster's sanity will decline further throughout the story. He still seems rather fun to hang out with to be a supervillain.

Not that supervillains can't be fun :)

I like the new characters, but I'm curious to see if any of the ones from the first story will make another appearance. Shall have to see, I guess.

I noticed very few grammar mistakes, if any. For this I humbly thank you since errors of that sort can be so torturous in excess. I think you referred to him as Richard instead of Ringmaster at some point in the prologue, I'm not sure if that was intentional or not.

Anyway, nice work. Update soon!

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