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9/18/2011 c8 kaymonkeygirl
Short but great:) update soon?
9/15/2011 c7 1Atramento
Typo Alert 2: 'to see John s something' should be 'to see John as something'

Just because. Oh and John is a @*~^% jerk.

I hate two-timing cheaters.
9/15/2011 c6 Atramento
Typo Alert: 'I turned over t Jonathan' should be 'I turned over to Jonathan.'

Just because I thought you should know. X)

Too bad Joe didn't recognize her. Drat.
9/15/2011 c5 Atramento
What's the bet her new brother is Joe?

[rueful smile]
9/15/2011 c4 Atramento
It's not a bad story, even if it is a bit short. If you wanted to make it better all you'd have to do is add more detail and more scenes. But if you don't want to don't worry.

This story almost reminds me of something I saw on YouTube:

'Sims 2 Love Story ♥ A Real Teen Love Story [high quality] ♥'
9/15/2011 c3 Atramento
"Why have I ever done to you?"

Did you mean "What have I ever done to you?"

Joe is a bit of a jerk...but I'm sure it will all work out eventually. X) Nice chapter.
9/15/2011 c2 Atramento
Dang that sucks. Joe don't relise how lucky he is. :)
9/15/2011 c1 Atramento
Nice so far. It sucks how boys can act like jerks that way. Anyway, I'll keep reading. X)
9/13/2011 c6 kaymonkeygirl
:) loved it
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